Addition to Empathy Help Introduction
- From: Harold Schreckengost <mewshi gmail com>
- To: Gnome Doc <gnome-doc-list gnome org>
- Subject: Addition to Empathy Help Introduction
- Date: Fri, 30 Apr 2010 19:24:56 -0400
While the attachment is titled additionToIntroduction.diff, it also
contains a trivial edit to the account creation page (changing "with" to
"using" in the first paragraph). I have no clue how to separate these
edits.
Thanks!
H.Schreck
diff --git a/help/C/create-account.page b/help/C/create-account.page
index 404172a..4aa0171 100644
--- a/help/C/create-account.page
+++ b/help/C/create-account.page
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
<p>This page provides information on creating a new account for various types of
accounts. Your account provider should give you a login ID and a password, as well
- as any additional information you need to connect with <app>Empathy</app>.</p>
+ as any additional information you need to connect using <app>Empathy</app>.</p>
<section id="facebook">
<title>Facebook</title>
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 7dc2441..08219d0 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -29,18 +29,24 @@
<p>
<app>Empathy</app> is an instant messaging application for the GNOME Desktop.
- It supports text messaging, voice & video call, file transfers and all the
+ It supports text messaging, voice & video calls, file transfers, and all the
most used messaging systems such as MSN and Google Talk.
</p>
<p>
<app>Empathy</app> includes features that help you better collaborate while at work,
- and that let you easily keep in touch with your friends.
+ and that let you easily keep in touch with your friends.
</p>
<p>
- You can group all the conversations in a single window, or have multiple windows for
- different kind of conversations; easily search through your previous conversations, and
+ Using <app>Empathy</app>, you can group all the conversations in a single window, have multiple windows for
+ different kind of conversations, easily search through your previous conversations, and
share your desktop in just two clicks.
</p>
+ <p>
+ To get started using <app>Empathy</app>, simply <link xref="add-account">add</link> or
+ <link xref="import-account">import</link> accounts. If you don't have any messaging accounts,
+ <app>Empathy</app> will allow you to <link xref="create-account">register for a new account</link>
+ for certain messaging services.
+ </p>
<figure>
<title><gui>Contact List</gui> window</title>
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