Addition to Empathy Help Introduction



While the attachment is titled additionToIntroduction.diff, it also contains a trivial edit to the account creation page (changing "with" to "using" in the first paragraph). I have no clue how to separate these edits.

Thanks!

H.Schreck
diff --git a/help/C/create-account.page b/help/C/create-account.page
index 404172a..4aa0171 100644
--- a/help/C/create-account.page
+++ b/help/C/create-account.page
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
 
   <p>This page provides information on creating a new account for various types of
   accounts.  Your account provider should give you a login ID and a password, as well
-  as any additional information you need to connect with <app>Empathy</app>.</p>
+  as any additional information you need to connect using <app>Empathy</app>.</p>
   
   <section id="facebook">
     <title>Facebook</title>
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 7dc2441..08219d0 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -29,18 +29,24 @@
 
   <p>
     <app>Empathy</app> is an instant messaging application for the GNOME Desktop.
-    It supports text messaging, voice &amp; video call, file transfers and all the
+    It supports text messaging, voice &amp; video calls, file transfers, and all the
     most used messaging systems such as MSN and Google Talk.
   </p>
   <p>
     <app>Empathy</app> includes features that help you better collaborate while at work,
-    and that let you easily keep in touch with your friends.  
+    and that let you easily keep in touch with your friends.
   </p>
   <p>
-    You can group all the conversations in a single window, or have multiple windows for
-    different kind of conversations; easily search through your previous conversations, and
+    Using <app>Empathy</app>, you can group all the conversations in a single window, have multiple windows for
+    different kind of conversations, easily search through your previous conversations, and
     share your desktop in just two clicks.
   </p>
+  <p>
+    To get started using <app>Empathy</app>, simply <link xref="add-account">add</link> or
+    <link xref="import-account">import</link> accounts.  If you don't have any messaging accounts,
+    <app>Empathy</app> will allow you to <link xref="create-account">register for a new account</link>
+    for certain messaging services.
+  </p>
 
   <figure>
     <title><gui>Contact List</gui> window</title>


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