Re: newbies

[Judith Samson <judith samson usaserve net>]

Alexander Kirillov wrote:
> 
>        Sorry if you get this message twice - I had some mail problems,
> and apparently the first time the message was not delivered...
> 
> So: I did write the appendix to users-guide for UNIX newbies. I'd like
> to hera your opinions on it before sending it to Dave for inclusion in
> the main users-guide. Take a look:
> html: http://www.math.sunysb.edu/~kirillov/newbies/
> sgml:  http://www.math.sunysb.edu/~kirillov/newbies/newbies.sgml
> 
> In particular, I am not a native English speaker, so my style and
> grammar are less than perfect.
> 
>         Best,
>                 Sasha
> PS. I know that some of the links are missing - they will be there
> when it is included in the main ug; I was just lazy to declare all
> external entities properly
> 
> -


I think it looks great!  And your English is practically perfect. Only
two comments:

1) I think the Linux Installation Guide was written by Matt Walsh, not
Matt Welsh, but I could be wrong.

2) Could you add a small section in Permissions about how to add and
remove permissions? 

Judith