[PATCH 1/4] Correct terminology in help file

[Milan Knizek <knizek volny cz>]

---
 help/C/gnome-color-manager.xml |   78 +++++++++++++++++++++------------------
 1 files changed, 42 insertions(+), 36 deletions(-)

diff --git a/help/C/gnome-color-manager.xml b/help/C/gnome-color-manager.xml
index 4788653..5e5da50 100644
--- a/help/C/gnome-color-manager.xml
+++ b/help/C/gnome-color-manager.xml
@@ -122,12 +122,12 @@
 
   <para>
     The &app; is a framework that helps the user generate, install and manage
-    device color on a <systemitem>GNOME desktop</systemitem>. It does this to
+    device colors on a <systemitem>GNOME desktop</systemitem>. It does this to
     help a user match color across all devices. This gives a consistent color
     to an image or document, wherever it is output. 
   </para>
   <para>
-    The &app; communicates the selected profiles to aware applications,
+    The &app; communicates the selected profiles to color-aware applications,
     maintaining the color across applications.
   </para>
   <para>
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@
   </screen>
   <para>
     ICC profiles should be imported into the <application>&app;</application>
-    by selecting a file in a nautilus window. You can import the file using:
+    by selecting a file in a nautilus window. You can also import the file using:
   </para>
   <screen>
     <prompt>bash$ </prompt><userinput>gcm-import <filename><![CDATA[<filepath>]]></filename></userinput>
@@ -174,14 +174,14 @@
 <section id="import">
   <title>Importing profiles</title>
   <para>
-    &application; installs a program to install profiles by simply double
+    &application; includes a program to install profiles by simply double
     clicking on them.
   </para>
 
   <section id="import-install">
     <title>Import a ICC profile</title>
     <figure>
-      <title>&app; dialog after double clicking a ICC or ICM file</title>
+      <title>&app; dialog after double clicking an ICC or ICM file</title>
       <screenshot>
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@
       </screenshot>
     </figure>
     <para>
-      This allows you to adjust a calibrated or generated profile.
+      This allows you to adjust a calibrated device or generated profile.
     </para>
     <tip>
       <para>
@@ -348,15 +348,15 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="preferences-calibration">
-    <title>Calibration</title>
+    <title>Calibration and profiling</title>
     <para>
-      &application; can generate ICC profiles with supported hardware
-      colorimeter devices.
+      &application; can generate ICC profiles with supported color
+      measuring instruments.
     </para>
 
     <figure>
       <title>
-        The first stage of calibration, which takes a few minutes.
+        The first stage is calibration, which takes a few minutes.
       </title>
       <screenshot>
         <mediaobject>
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@
     </figure>
     <figure>
       <title>
-        The final stage of calibration, which can take over 15 minutes.
+        The final stage is profiling (characterization), which can take over 15 minutes.
       </title>
       <screenshot>
         <mediaobject>
@@ -380,15 +380,15 @@
     </figure>
 
     <para>
-      When profiling a display you may have to change the calibration device to
-      operate in different modes.
-      You may have to remove your colorimeter from the screen to change the
+      When calibrating and profiling a display you may have to change the color
+      measuring instrument to operate in different modes.
+      You may have to remove your instrument from the screen to change the
       modes.
-      Ensure the device is put back on the screen after you have changed any
+      Ensure the instrument is put back on the screen after you have changed any
       settings.
     </para>
     <figure id="prefs-dialogs-device-configure">
-      <title>&app; Device Configure Dialog</title>
+      <title>&app; Instrument Configure Dialog</title>
       <screenshot>
         <mediaobject>
           <imageobject>
@@ -399,10 +399,10 @@
     </figure>
 
     <para>
-      When profiling a display connected using a VGA or DVI connection, often
-      the type of device is not known.
+      When calibrating and profiling a display connected using a VGA or DVI
+      connection, often the type of device is not known.
       By answering correctly, &application; can generate better profiles for
-      the device you are trying to profile.
+      the device you are trying to calibrate and profile.
     </para>
     <figure id="prefs-dialogs-screen-type">
       <title>&app; Screen Type Dialog</title>
@@ -418,8 +418,8 @@
     <para>
       When profiling a printer you can also generate images to be sent to a
       print shop or photograph processing agency.
-      The calibration details will be saved, and you will need to select the
-      correct calibration results when you recieve the proofs back.
+      The profiling details will be saved, and you will need to select the
+      correct profiling results when you receive the proofs back.
     </para>
     <figure id="prefs-dialogs-print-mode">
       <title>&app; Print Mode Dialog</title>
@@ -440,7 +440,7 @@
   <para>This section list questions frequently asked about color management</para>
 
   <section id="faq-missing-vcgt">
-    <title>Missing information for whole-screen calibration</title>
+    <title>Missing information for whole-screen color correction</title>
     <para>
       Unfortunately, many vendor-supplied ICC profiles do not include the
       information required for whole-screen color correction.
@@ -448,62 +448,68 @@
       compensation, but you will not see all the colors of your screen change.
     </para>
     <para>
-      In order to create a full profile, you will need to use a special
-      calibration device called a colorimeter.
+      In order to create a display profile, which includes both calibration and
+      characterisation data, you will need to use a special color measuring
+      instruments callled a colorimeter or a spectrometer.
     </para>
   </section>
 
   <section id="faq-supported-colorimeters">
-    <title>What colorimeter devices are supported?</title>
+    <title>Which color measuring instruments are supported?</title>
     <para>
-      GNOME Color Manager relies on ArgyllCMS to support measurement devices. 
-		Thus the following display calibrators are supported:
+      GNOME Color Manager relies on ArgyllCMS to support color instruments. 
+		Thus the following display measuring instruments are supported:
     </para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Gretag-Macbeth Eye-One Pro
+          Gretag-Macbeth Eye-One Pro (spectrometer)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Gretag-Macbeth Eye-One Monitor
+          Gretag-Macbeth Eye-One Monitor (spectrometer)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Gretag-Macbeth Eye-One Display 1, 2 или LT
+          Gretag-Macbeth Eye-One Display 1, 2 or LT (colorimeter)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-           X-Rite ColorMunki
+           X-Rite ColorMunki Design or Photo (spectrometer)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Pantone Huey
+           X-Rite ColorMunki Create (colorimeter)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          MonacoOPTIX
+          Pantone Huey (colorimeter)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          ColorVision Spyder 2 and 3
+          MonacoOPTIX (colorimeter)
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Colorimètre HCFR
+          ColorVision Spyder 2 and 3 (colorimeter)
+        </para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>
+          Colorimètre HCFR (colorimeter)
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
   </section>
   <section id="faq-supported-targets">
-    <title>What target types are supported?</title>
+    <title>Which target types are supported?</title>
     <para>
       GNOME Color Manager supports the following types of targets:
     </para>
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