Re: News Item | Board of Directors Announcement



Thanks, Karen! I'll see if I can work in some of your suggestions and send a 2nd attempt once complete. We have a Board meeting tomorrow, so I'll aim to get a quote from Shaun then :)

In the meantime, @everyone else - more edits / suggestions are welcome, so please keep them coming!


On Mon, Jul 11, 2016 at 2:06 PM, Karen Sandler <karen gnome org> wrote:
On 2016-07-11 16:58, Nuritzi Sanchez wrote:

It'd be great to post this on Wednesday, so please add your thoughts
and edits before then. Thanks!

This looks good to me! A few suggestions:

* maybe mention that the board are volunteers?
* specifically name the outgoing members and thank them for their time on the board
* include a quote, perhaps from last year's president?
* perhaps mention the breadth of experience that the board has? Like: the new board has experience that spans the GNOME project, from development to design to usability... etc.

karen



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