Re: Website - Pending content tasks

[Paul Cutler <pcutler gnome org>]

I would recommend staying with second person "You" but being more formal "GNOME is" rather than contractions.

Paul

On Mon, Feb 15, 2010 at 1:09 PM, Darton Williams <dartonw gmail com> wrote:

On Mon, Feb 15, 2010 at 7:32 AM, Lucas Rocha <lucasr gnome org> wrote:

> Download:
> - Main page looks ok, a final review would be nice.

http://website-editors.gnome.org/download
Marking as "Draft Available", proofread.

Quick note: the "How to Install GNOME" section uses contractions
(GNOME is -> GNOME's) resulting in an informal voice, is this the
intent?
"You're already running a Linux or UNIX distribution, but GNOME's
missing? Don't hesitate: GNOME's very..."

> - Distributions page is a bit outdated. Someone needs to check the
> data and update it accordingly with latest GNOME releases.

http://website-editors.gnome.org/download/distributions
Verified distros listed, added a few more shipping 2.28. Marking as
"Draft Available".

> - Installation page has a too long intro. Has a lot of TODO items in
> the shown data. Needs volunteers.
> - Live Images content looks mostly ok,  a final review would be nice.
> Has a TODO item about Bittorrents.
> - GNOME apps on Windows still needs content. Needs volunteers.
> - GNOME apps on Mac still needs content. Needs volunteers.
> - Latest Sources needs intro. Has a bunch of TODO items. Needs volunteers.
>

Best,

dartonw

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