Re: GNOME Amazon stores up and running

[Patrick Fey <inside nachtarbeiter net>]

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Hi Jaap,

> I've added a logo and text to the sidebar.
> Test site: http://gnome.haitsma.org/friends/
>
> What do you think, ready to commit?

looks nice. I think you did a very good job on the whole Amazon project!
Two caveats, though:

a) I'm not a native speaker, but shouldn't it be "purchase at" instead
of "purchase in"?

b) I'd at a dot at the end of the sentence.

While you're at it, could you please

a) add a dot at the end of "For details contact <fundraising at gnome org>"

b) Change the corporate sponsorship paragraph at the end of the page to:

"Do you as a company want to sponsor GNOME and take a seat in the GNOME
Advisory Board? Please contact <fundraising at gnome org>." (added
question mark in between and changed sponsoring to sponsor)

I think we also need to update the check.html page, since the amounts
mentioned there do not match what we have on the index page right now.
Or is this intentional?

:-) Patrick
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