Re: Proposal for GNOME press release about Nokia device




Nice work!

Just nitpicking, not something substantial to change. ::)

1. "It's great to see an industry leader such as..."
"It is impressive to see an industry leader such as..."
I feel it's too informal to use "It's great to see". Sounds too US-english.

2. "It's great to see an industry leader such as..."
"It is great to see an industry leader such as..."

3. " Nokia's use of many GNOME technologies, "
"Nokia's use of several GNOME technologies,"
I would prefer "several" to "many". Again the issue on informality.

4. Regarding Nokia, patents and the Linux kernel. I suppose you are referring to
http://www.nokia.co.uk/nokia/0,,28358,00.html?press_release_id=http://press.nokia.com/PR/200505/995845.xml
As Alex mentioned, I feel it is risky to mention here.

5. "We think Nokia have set an example to follow.”, says Chairman of the "
"We think Nokia have set an example to follow”, says Chairman of the "
I think it looks strange to add the full stop. Anyone?

Simos

Christian Fredrik Kalager Schaller wrote:

Attached is a press release draft I wrote, edited and cleaned up a bit
by Murray.
Christian

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  GNOME Foundation congratulates Nokia on launch of Nokia 770

Nokia Corporation launched today the Nokia 770 web tablet based on GNOME open source technologies

May 25, 2005 - Boston, USA

The GNOME Foundation would like to congratulate Nokia on their sucessful launch of the Nokia 770 web tablet. It's great to see an industry leader such as Nokia bring GNU/Linux and GNOME technologies to the mobile devices market.

Nokia's use of many GNOME technologies, such as GTK+, GStreamer, GConf, GNOME-VFS and dbus, acknowledges the effort made by hundreds of people over the last few years. This also shows how the GNOME community allows a wide variety of companies and individuals to successfully work together.

This is in addition to Nokia's previous granting of patent rights to Linux Kernel developers. The GNOME Foundation is truly excited by Nokia's involvement and looks forward to extending the relationship during this year's GUADEC conference in Stuttgart, where Nokia is one of the presenters.

The GNOME Foundation would also like say thank Fluendo, OpenedHand and Imendio who have worked with Nokia on this device, providing expertise in the use of GNOME technologies.

“The GNOME Foundation is happy to see Nokia taking a very open approach with this project, ranging from the use of open source software to Creative Commons licensing for the graphics and artwork. We think Nokia have set an example to follow.”, says Chairman of the GNOME Foundation board, Owen Taylor.


    About the GNOME Foundation

Comprised of hundreds of volunteer developers and industry-leading companies, the GNOME Foundation is committed to supporting the advancement of GNOME. The Foundation provides organizational, financial and legal support to the GNOME project and helps determine its vision and roadmap. GNOME is an entirely free user environment for desktops, networked servers and portable Internet devices. The modern architecture and design of GNOME includes a technically advanced application development platform and a powerful end-user desktop environment. Major software companies and computer manufacturers support the GNOME development effort, which is led by a worldwide community of volunteers. More information on GNOME is available at www.gnome.org.


    About Nokia

Nokia is a world leader in mobile communications, driving the growth and sustainability of the broader mobility industry. Nokia connects people to each other and the information that matters to them with easy-to-use and innovative products like mobile phones, devices and solutions for imaging, games, media and businesses. Nokia provides equipment, solutions and services for network operators and corporations. www.nokia.com




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