Murray Cumming wrote:
Here are my 2c ideas. (All are constructive! ;-)) 1. Second and third paragraphs should be devoted to GNOME feature sets, rather than quotes from GNOME people. Editors tend to read the first few paragraph and the very last (if there's a note to editor part).I'm not sure. I guess that journalists like quotes.
Hi In fact I was trying to say "Place all quotes after 2nd or 3rd paragraph, after all the GNOME specific features". Regards Görkem
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