[gnome-user-docs/wip/mdh: 57/57] gnome-help: update user settings (fixes #146)




commit 9777c506f861da412da188c191122cde06b95c65
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sat Apr 2 13:09:51 2022 -0400

    gnome-help: update user settings (fixes #146)

 gnome-help/C/user-add.page            | 22 ++++++++++++++--------
 gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page   | 14 ++++++++------
 gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page      | 16 +++++++++-------
 gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page |  7 +++----
 gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page  | 21 +++++++++++----------
 gnome-help/C/user-delete.page         | 13 +++++++------
 6 files changed, 52 insertions(+), 41 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
index 1854d4db..da8538dc 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
@@ -6,10 +6,8 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage" group="#first"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
+    <revision version="gnome:42" status="final" date="2022-03-17"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -55,8 +53,8 @@
       type in your password when prompted.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press the <gui style="button">+</gui> button, below the list of
-      accounts on the left, to add a new user account.</p>
+      <p>Press the <gui style="button">+ Add User...</gui> button under
+      <gui>Other Users</gui> to add a new user account.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If you want the new user to have
@@ -72,15 +70,18 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>You can choose to set a password for the new user, or let them set it
-      themselves on their first login.</p>
-      <p>If you choose to set the password now,
+      themselves on their first login. If you choose to set the password now,
       you can press the <gui style="button"><media its:translate="no" type="image"
       src="figures/system-run-symbolic.svg" width="16" height="16">
       <span its:translate="yes">generate password</span></media></gui> icon to
       automatically generate a random password.</p>
+      <p>To connect the user to a network domain, click
+      <gui>Enterprise Login</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Add</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Add</gui>. When the user has been added,
+      <gui>Parental Controls</gui> and <gui>Language</gui> settings can be
+      adjusted.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
@@ -94,5 +95,10 @@
     be shown in the login window. The system provides some stock photos you can
     use, or you can select your own or take a picture with your webcam.</p>
   </note>
+  <comment>
+    <cite date="2022-03-17">Michael Hill</cite>
+    <p>Link to Parental Controls help. Elaborate on uder panel Language
+    settings. Add a page for Account Activity.</p>
+  </comment>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
index 10bbd3e4..a959872b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
@@ -7,10 +7,8 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#privileges"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-admin-explain" />
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
+    <revision version="gnome:42" status="final" date="2022-04-02"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -20,6 +18,10 @@
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -50,11 +52,11 @@
       type in your password when prompted.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the user whose privileges you want to change.</p>
+      <p>Under <gui>Other Users</gui>, select the user whose privileges you want
+      to change.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the label <gui>Standard</gui> next to <gui>Account Type</gui>
-      and select <gui>Administrator</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Set the <gui>Administrator</gui> switch to on.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>The user’s privileges will be changed when they next log in.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page b/gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page
index ff2f51dc..41d38cdd 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page
@@ -7,16 +7,18 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage" />
     <link type="seealso" xref="shell-exit" />
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-04-04" status="review" />
-    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review" />
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.33.3" date="2019-07-21" status="final"/>
+    <revision version="gnome:42" status="final" date="2022-04-02"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -36,14 +38,14 @@
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select the user account that you want to log in to automatically at
-      startup.</p>
-    </item>
     <item>
       <p>Press <gui style="button">Unlock</gui> in the top right corner and
       type in your password when prompted.</p>
     </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>If it is a different user account that you want to log into
+      automatically, select the account under <gui>Other Users</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
     <item>
       <p>Switch the <gui>Automatic Login</gui> switch to on.</p>
     </item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
index 9c77e3c4..7d581799 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
@@ -8,10 +8,8 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-goodpassword"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-admin-explain"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
+    <revision version="gnome:42" status="final" date="2022-04-02"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -76,7 +74,8 @@
     <item>
       <p>Click the label <gui>·····</gui> next to <gui>Password</gui>. If you
       are changing the password for a different user, you will first need to
-      <gui>Unlock</gui> the panel.</p>
+      <gui>Unlock</gui> the panel and select the account under
+      <gui>Other Users</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Enter your current password, then a new password. Enter your new
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
index 07b51976..40b306f6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
@@ -7,11 +7,8 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-admin-explain"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.14.0" date="2014-10-08" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.32.0" date="2019-03-16" status="final"/>
+    <revision version="gnome:42" status="final" date="2022-03-17"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -25,6 +22,10 @@
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -43,8 +44,8 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
+      overview and start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
@@ -52,12 +53,12 @@
     <item>
       <p>If you want to edit a user other than yourself, press
       <gui style="button">Unlock</gui> in the top right corner and type in your
-      password when prompted.</p>
+      password when prompted. Choose the user from <gui>Other Users</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the picture next to your name. A drop-down gallery will be shown
-      with some stock login photos. If you like one of them, click it to use it
-      for yourself.</p>
+      <p>Click the pencil icon next to your name. A drop-down gallery will be
+      shown with some stock login photos. If you like one of them, click it to
+      use it for yourself.</p>
       <list>
         <item>
           <p>If you would rather use a picture you already have on your
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
index fcd51501..70fb54e9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
@@ -8,10 +8,8 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-add"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-admin-explain"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
+    <revision version="gnome:42" status="final" date="2022-04-02"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -61,9 +59,12 @@
       type in your password when prompted.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the user that you want to delete and press the
-      <gui style="button">-</gui> button, below the list of accounts on the
-      left, to delete that user account.</p>
+      <p>Click on the user account that you want to delete under
+      <gui>Other Users</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Press the <gui style="button">Remove User...</gui> button to delete
+      that user account.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Each user has their own home folder for their files and settings. You


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