[gimp-web] content: minor news fixes.

[Jehan <jehanp src gnome org>]

commit 4da84c21a574a96da9ac1363b88646c88867a25d
Author: Jehan <jehan girinstud io>
Date:   Tue Sep 14 16:28:08 2021 +0200

    content: minor news fixes.

 content/news/2021/2021-09-07/index.md | 24 ++++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/content/news/2021/2021-09-07/index.md b/content/news/2021/2021-09-07/index.md
index 44833be1..490ce936 100644
--- a/content/news/2021/2021-09-07/index.md
+++ b/content/news/2021/2021-09-07/index.md
@@ -49,12 +49,12 @@ improving them.
 
 A new core developer integrated the team: Stanislav Grinkov.
 
-Contributors Des McGuinness and Lloyd Konneker were given "*reporter*"
-access which allows them to help with triaging on the bugtracker:
-labelling, closing, reopening and moving reports…
+Des McGuinness and Lloyd Konneker were given "*reporter*" access which
+allows them to help with triaging on the bugtracker: labelling, closing,
+reopening and moving reports…
 
-The contributor nmat was given "*reporter*" access on the website
-project (`gimp-web`), for his tremendous help with website maintenance.
+nmat was given "*reporter*" access on the website project (`gimp-web`),
+for his tremendous help with website maintenance.
 
 # Translators
 
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ longstanding issues of GIMP in Windows finally got fixed:
   [gtk!2767](https://gitlab.gnome.org/GNOME/gtk/-/merge_requests/2767))
 
 We would like to thank in particular Luca Bacci, Jacob Boerema, LRN, Ell
-and all the contributors who stayed on top of things for these
+and all the contributors who stayed on top of Windows issues for these
 progresses to happen, sometimes taking years of patience.
 
 # What about macOS?
@@ -142,8 +142,8 @@ Windows developers used to be very few too. As you can see, this is
 clearly changing.
 Therefore if anyone cares about GIMP for macOS, please step forward.
 
-You may have noticed that GIMP 2.10.24's macOS DMG was released a few
-months late. Even this only happened because Jehan spent days to fix the
+You may have noticed that GIMP 2.10.24's macOS DMG was released months
+late. Even this only happened because Jehan spent days to fix the
 build on the remote build server, bit by bit, without any local access
 to a macOS machine, nor any ways to run and test himself. If the
 packagers are still unavailable, we may try to do the same for this
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ It is obviously not a sustainable release model. It is even worse for
 the development versions: we haven't had a single build for GIMP 2.99.x
 on macOS yet.
 
-So if you want this to change, just join us, we don't bite! 🤗
+So if you want this to change, join us, we don't bite! 🤗
 
 # GEGL and babl
 
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ As usual GIMP 2.10.28 is available on [GIMP official website
   it up, but some still haven't. So if the download fails, just try to
   click the `Download` button again.
 
-* The macOS DMG package will hopefully be published soonish.
+* The macOS DMG package will hopefully be published *soonish*.
 
 # What's next
 
@@ -199,8 +199,8 @@ versions, nowadays most feature development happen in the development
 version for future GIMP 3. You may have seen some of it, if you follow
 our work on social networks, or if you test nightlies of GIMP.
 
-Otherwise, you'll have more nice surprises when we will release GIMP
-2.99.8 development version!
+Otherwise, you will have more surprises when we will release GIMP 2.99.8
+development version!
 
 Don't forget you can [donate to the project and personally fund several
 GIMP developers](https://www.gimp.org/donating/), as a way to give back