[gnome-user-docs/piotrdrag/kravis-fixes: 6/6] Fix some recently introduced typos and bugs




commit ba459c448a877e36d5c2b20f21b3be94800f28b7
Author: Piotr Drąg <piotrdrag gmail com>
Date:   Mon May 10 14:22:12 2021 +0200

    Fix some recently introduced typos and bugs

 gnome-help/C/about-this-guide.page                | 4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page                    | 2 +-
 gnome-help/C/accounts-provider-not-available.page | 2 +-
 gnome-help/C/backup-how.page                      | 2 +-
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page                       | 5 ++---
 gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page             | 4 ++--
 6 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/about-this-guide.page b/gnome-help/C/about-this-guide.page
index a4bc87a2..3a97e95b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/about-this-guide.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/about-this-guide.page
@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ computer more effectively. Here are a few notes regarding the help guide:</p>
   as you start typing.</p></item>
   <item><p>The guide is constantly being improved. Although we attempt to
   provide you with a comprehensive set of helpful information, we know we can’t
-  answer all of your questions here, if you need more assistance you can check
-  with your distribution's support team</p></item>
+  answer all of your questions here. If you need more assistance, you can check
+  with your distribution’s support team.</p></item>
 </list>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page b/gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page
index 708e062a..f98fdc45 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
   <title>Add an account</title>
 
   <p>Adding an account will help link your online accounts with your
-desktop. Thus, your email programs, calendar program and other related
+desktop. Thus, your email client, calendar and other related
   applications will be set up for you.</p>
 
   <steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts-provider-not-available.page 
b/gnome-help/C/accounts-provider-not-available.page
index 2f65337a..57233753 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts-provider-not-available.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts-provider-not-available.page
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 
   <title>Why is my account type not on the list?</title>
 
-  <p>Support for your favorite online service  needs someone to develop
+  <p>Support for your favorite online service needs someone to develop
   it. Only the account types that are listed are currently supported.</p>
 
   <note style="advanced">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
index c80a70e4..0097d79e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
  your preferences for the backup, as well as how to restore your data.</p>
 
   <p>An alternative option is to <link xref="files-copy">copy your files</link>
- to a safe location, such as an external hard drive, a online storage service,
+ to a safe location, such as an external hard drive, an online storage service,
  or a USB drive. Your <link xref="backup-thinkabout">personal files</link>
  and settings are usually in your Home folder, so you can copy them from there.</p>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
index f6b44de8..be99434a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
@@ -32,13 +32,12 @@
 types of devices to your computer. Bluetooth is commonly used for headsets
 and other devices like mice and keyboards. You can also use Bluetooth to
 <link xref="bluetooth-send-file">send files between devices</link>, such as
-from your computer to your cell phone. For simplicity purposes "Bluetooth" will 
-be referred to as "BT" throughout the rest of this document</p>
+from your computer to your cell phone.</p>
 
 <comment>
 <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
 <p>Things to improve: The BT settings has a "Browse Files" button for devices.
-We only cover push file transfers. It Might also be worth mentioning something
+We only cover push file transfers. It might also be worth mentioning something
 on receiving files when doing push from another device.</p>
 <p>We don't have explicit pages for input devices. Might be worth a topic like
 "Connect a BT mouse or keyboard", linked under Mouse, Keyboard, and BT.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page b/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page
index 63632f1a..983ad653 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page
@@ -32,8 +32,8 @@
     <p>GNOME does not come with a firewall, this page needs to be revisited.</p>
   </comment>
 
-  <p>GNOME does not come with a firewall, for support beyond this document
-  check with your distro's support team or your organization's IT department.
+  <p>GNOME does not come with a firewall, so for support beyond this document
+  check with your distribution’s support team or your organization’s IT department.
   Your computer should be equipped with a <em>firewall</em> that allows it to
   block programs from being accessed by other people on the internet or your
   network. This helps to keep your computer secure.</p>


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