[gnome-user-docs] Update bluetooth.page Line 36: Replace "input" with "other" Line 38: Add For "simplicity purposes "B
- From: Petr Kovář <pmkovar src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs] Update bluetooth.page Line 36: Replace "input" with "other" Line 38: Add For "simplicity purposes "B
- Date: Wed, 5 May 2021 20:58:36 +0000 (UTC)
commit a755b10860464af74c4b3c16636b63929eb7d0c7
Author: Klein Kravis <kleinkravis44 outlook com>
Date: Sun May 24 01:29:35 2020 +0000
Update bluetooth.page
Line 36: Replace "input" with "other"
Line 38: Add For "simplicity purposes "Bluetooth" will
be referred to as "BT" throughout the rest of this document"
Line 43: Add "it" grammar
gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page | 12 ++++++++----
1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
index 993cab0e..f6b44de8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
@@ -16,7 +16,10 @@
<name>Shaun McCance</name>
<email>shaunm gnome org</email>
</credit>
-
+ <credit type="Editor">
+ <name>Klein Kravis</name>
+ <email>kleinkravis44 outlook com</email>
+ </credit>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
<desc>Connect to devices over Bluetooth to transfer files or use
@@ -27,14 +30,15 @@
<p>Bluetooth is a wireless protocol that allows you to connect many different
types of devices to your computer. Bluetooth is commonly used for headsets
-and input devices like mice and keyboards. You can also use Bluetooth to
+and other devices like mice and keyboards. You can also use Bluetooth to
<link xref="bluetooth-send-file">send files between devices</link>, such as
-from your computer to your cell phone.</p>
+from your computer to your cell phone. For simplicity purposes "Bluetooth" will
+be referred to as "BT" throughout the rest of this document</p>
<comment>
<cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
<p>Things to improve: The BT settings has a "Browse Files" button for devices.
-We only cover push file transfers. Might also be worth mentioning something
+We only cover push file transfers. It Might also be worth mentioning something
on receiving files when doing push from another device.</p>
<p>We don't have explicit pages for input devices. Might be worth a topic like
"Connect a BT mouse or keyboard", linked under Mouse, Keyboard, and BT.</p>
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