[gnome-user-docs] Update bluetooth.page Line 36: Replace "input" with "other" Line 38: Add For "simplicity purposes "B



commit a755b10860464af74c4b3c16636b63929eb7d0c7
Author: Klein Kravis <kleinkravis44 outlook com>
Date:   Sun May 24 01:29:35 2020 +0000

    Update bluetooth.page
    Line 36: Replace "input" with "other"
    Line 38: Add For "simplicity purposes "Bluetooth" will
    be referred to as "BT" throughout the rest of this document"
    Line 43: Add "it" grammar

 gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page | 12 ++++++++----
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
index 993cab0e..f6b44de8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
@@ -16,7 +16,10 @@
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
-
+    <credit type="Editor">
+      <name>Klein Kravis</name>
+      <email>kleinkravis44 outlook com</email>
+    </credit>  
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
     <desc>Connect to devices over Bluetooth to transfer files or use
@@ -27,14 +30,15 @@
 
 <p>Bluetooth is a wireless protocol that allows you to connect many different
 types of devices to your computer. Bluetooth is commonly used for headsets
-and input devices like mice and keyboards. You can also use Bluetooth to
+and other devices like mice and keyboards. You can also use Bluetooth to
 <link xref="bluetooth-send-file">send files between devices</link>, such as
-from your computer to your cell phone.</p>
+from your computer to your cell phone. For simplicity purposes "Bluetooth" will 
+be referred to as "BT" throughout the rest of this document</p>
 
 <comment>
 <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
 <p>Things to improve: The BT settings has a "Browse Files" button for devices.
-We only cover push file transfers. Might also be worth mentioning something
+We only cover push file transfers. It Might also be worth mentioning something
 on receiving files when doing push from another device.</p>
 <p>We don't have explicit pages for input devices. Might be worth a topic like
 "Connect a BT mouse or keyboard", linked under Mouse, Keyboard, and BT.</p>


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