[gnome-user-docs] Update accounts-add.page Line 32-36: Added credit for Myself Line 40: Replaced "photos" with "files"



commit 3f93555d79b5dc259034c52dada5247024326c92
Author: Klein Kravis <kleinkravis44 outlook com>
Date:   Sat May 23 00:19:14 2020 +0000

    Update accounts-add.page
    Line 32-36: Added credit for Myself
    Line 40: Replaced "photos" with "files" more broad and generic
    Line 47: Replaced "Chat program" with "Calendar program" most people use apps like Whatsapp, no 
integration with Gnome
    Line 62: Removed "which" Unnecessary word
    Line 67: Replaced "Google username" with "email address" Google does not use a username service. May be 
confusing to some users

 gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page | 15 ++++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page b/gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page
index d719e1df..708e062a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page
@@ -29,17 +29,22 @@
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
       <years>2015</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Klein Kravis</name>
+      <email>kleinkravis44 outlook com</email>
+      <years>2020</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Allow applications to access your accounts online for photos,
+    <desc>Allow applications to access your accounts online for files,
     contacts, calendars, and more.</desc>
 </info>
 
   <title>Add an account</title>
 
-  <p>Adding an account will help link your online accounts with your GNOME
-  desktop. Thus, your email program, chat program and other related
+  <p>Adding an account will help link your online accounts with your
+desktop. Thus, your email programs, calendar program and other related
   applications will be set up for you.</p>
 
   <steps>
@@ -54,12 +59,12 @@
       <p>Select an account from the list on the right.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the type of account which you want to add.</p>
+      <p>Select the type of account you want to add.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>A small website window or dialog will open where you can enter your
       online account credentials. For example, if you are setting up a Google
-      account, enter your Google username and password. Some providers allow
+      account, enter your email address and password. Some providers allow
       you to create a new account from the login dialog.</p>
     </item>
     <item>


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