[gnome-user-docs/wip/mdh] gnome-help: update power pages and close #88



commit 824a4602d2934396ffda219c79481e51ceb55360
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sun Mar 21 18:27:25 2021 -0400

    gnome-help: update power pages and close #88

 gnome-help/C/display-brightness.page | 10 ++++------
 gnome-help/C/power-autosuspend.page  |  5 ++---
 gnome-help/C/power-status.page       | 11 ++++++++---
 gnome-help/C/power-wireless.page     |  6 +++---
 gnome-help/Makefile.am               |  2 ++
 5 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-brightness.page b/gnome-help/C/display-brightness.page
index 76b0fbfc..62c1b55e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-brightness.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-brightness.page
@@ -9,10 +9,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="power-whydim"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="a11y-contrast"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.4" date="2013-03-28" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-30" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-19" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.33" date="2019-07-19" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision version="gnome:40" date="2021-03-21" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -73,8 +70,9 @@
       <p>Click <gui>Power</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Adjust the <gui>Screen brightness</gui> slider to the value you want to
-      use. The change should take effect immediately.</p>
+      <p>In the <gui>Power Saving</gui> section, adjust the <gui>Screen
+      brightness</gui> slider to the value you want to use. The change should
+      take effect immediately.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-autosuspend.page b/gnome-help/C/power-autosuspend.page
index 4170c84a..852f3bb2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-autosuspend.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-autosuspend.page
@@ -8,8 +8,7 @@
      <link type="seealso" xref="power-suspend"/>
      <link type="seealso" xref="shell-exit#suspend"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.20" date="2016-06-15" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.33.3" date="2019-07-21" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision version="gnome:3.38.3" date="2021-03-07" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -37,7 +36,7 @@
       <p>Click <gui>Power</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>In the <gui>Suspend &amp; Power Button</gui> section, click
+      <p>In the <gui>Power Saving</gui> section, click
       <gui>Automatic suspend</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-status.page b/gnome-help/C/power-status.page
index 9f764e3e..d5762f4e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-status.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-status.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="power" group="#first"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="power-batterylife"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.20" date="2016-06-15" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision version="gnome:40" date="2021-03-21" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -32,8 +32,8 @@
       overview and start typing <gui>Power</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Power</gui> to open the panel. The status of known devices
-      is displayed.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Power</gui> to open the panel. The status of
+      <gui>Batteries</gui> and known <gui>Devices</gui> is displayed.</p>
     </item>
 
   </steps>
@@ -57,5 +57,10 @@
 
     <p>The <gui>Devices</gui> section displays the status of connected
     devices.</p>
+    
+    <p>The system status area of the top bar shows the approximate charge level
+    of the main internal battery, and whether it is currently charging or
+    draining. It can also display the charge as a
+    <link xref="power-percentage">percentage</link>.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-wireless.page b/gnome-help/C/power-wireless.page
index 2eeefc08..942a0c15 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-wireless.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-wireless.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.20" date="2016-06-15" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.33.3" date="2019-07-21" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision version="gnome:40" date="2021-03-21" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -37,9 +38,8 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>The <gui>Power Saving</gui> section contains switches for
-      <gui>Wi-Fi</gui>, <gui>Mobile broadband</gui>, and <gui>Bluetooth</gui>.
-      Switch the unused services to off. Re-enable when needed by switching to
-      on.</p>
+      <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> and <gui>Bluetooth</gui>. Switch the unused services to
+      off. Re-enable when needed by switching to on.</p>
     </item>
 
   </steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/Makefile.am b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
index 4eccfc8f..676a8b57 100644
--- a/gnome-help/Makefile.am
+++ b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
@@ -355,6 +355,8 @@ HELP_FILES = \
        power-lowpower.page \
        power-nowireless.page \
        power-othercountry.page \
+       power-percentage.page \
+       power-profile.page \
        power-status.page \
        power-suspendfail.page \
        power-suspend.page \


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