[gnome-user-docs/mcatanzaro/gnome3: 13/13] Remove a few remaining references to GNOME 3




commit 10c665807b2acb2e8d043b4684d2b3c9db6e96dc
Author: Michael Catanzaro <mcatanzaro redhat com>
Date:   Wed Jun 16 18:23:18 2021 -0500

    Remove a few remaining references to GNOME 3

 gnome-help/C/gnome-classic.page      | 6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/index.page              | 2 +-
 gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page | 7 ++++---
 3 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gnome-classic.page b/gnome-help/C/gnome-classic.page
index 6a7ae8d2..7f3d6b20 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gnome-classic.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gnome-classic.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.10.1" date="2013-10-28" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.29" date="2018-08-28" status="review"/>
-    <revision version="gnome:40" date="2021-03-03" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="gnome:40" date="2021-06-16" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
 <if:choose>
   <if:when test="!platform:gnome-classic">
   <p><em>GNOME Classic</em> is a feature for users who prefer a more traditional
-  desktop experience. While <em>GNOME Classic</em> is based on <em>GNOME 3</em>
+  desktop experience. While <em>GNOME Classic</em> is based on modern GNOME
   technologies, it provides a number of changes to the user interface, such as
   the <gui>Applications</gui> and
   <gui>Places</gui> menus on the top bar, and a window
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
   </if:when>
   <if:when test="platform:gnome-classic">
 <p><em>GNOME Classic</em> is a feature for users who prefer a more traditional
-  desktop experience. While <em>GNOME Classic</em> is based on <em>GNOME 3</em>
+  desktop experience. While <em>GNOME Classic</em> is based on modern GNOME
   technologies, it provides a number of changes to the user interface, such as
   the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Applications</gui> and
   <gui>Places</gui> menus on the top bar, and a window
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/index.page b/gnome-help/C/index.page
index 9c69a572..13fd3392 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/index.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/index.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
       type="guide" id="index">
 
 <info>
-    <desc>A guide for GNOME 3 desktop users.</desc>
+    <desc>A guide for GNOME desktop users.</desc>
 
     <title type='link'>GNOME Help</title>
     <title type='text'>GNOME Help</title>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
index f8f4dbcd..78feea98 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
@@ -14,6 +14,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.29" date="2018-08-28" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.33.3" date="2019-07-19" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.35.91" date="2020-07-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="gnome:40" date="2021-06-16" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -40,9 +41,9 @@
 
   <title>Visual overview of GNOME</title>
 
-  <p>GNOME 3 features a completely reimagined user interface designed to
-  stay out of your way, minimize distractions, and help you get things done.
-  When you first log in, you will see an empty desktop and the top bar.</p>
+  <p>GNOME features a user interface designed to stay out of your way, minimize
+  distractions, and help you get things done. When you first log in, you will
+  see the <gui>Activities</gui> overview and the top bar.</p>
 
 <if:choose>
   <if:when test="!platform:gnome-classic">


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