[connections] onboarding: Tweak text

[Felipe Borges <felipeborges src gnome org>]

commit b9872223887820eaf03b54ca0c732e262ca7b084
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Thu Aug 12 09:46:01 2021 +0100

    onboarding: Tweak text
    
    General refinements to the labels.
    
    Related #59

 src/ui/onboarding-dialog.ui | 11 ++++++-----
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/src/ui/onboarding-dialog.ui b/src/ui/onboarding-dialog.ui
index 3fab6d2..f21b280 100644
--- a/src/ui/onboarding-dialog.ui
+++ b/src/ui/onboarding-dialog.ui
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
                 <child>
                   <object class="ConnectionsOnboardingDialogPage" id="homepage">
                     <property name="title" translatable="yes">Welcome to Connections</property>
-                    <property name="description" translatable="yes">Click Next to learn about how it 
works.</property>
+                    <property name="description" translatable="yes">Learn about how Connections 
works.</property>
                     <property name="image">/org/gnome/Connections/ui/onboarding/welcome.svg</property>
                   </object>
                 </child>
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
                 <child>
                   <object class="ConnectionsOnboardingDialogPage">
                     <property name="title" translatable="yes">Use other desktops, remotely</property>
-                    <property name="description" translatable="yes">Use Connections to view the screen of 
another desktop, and control it using a pointer and keyboard.</property>
+                    <property name="description" translatable="yes">Use Connections to view the screen of 
other desktops. You can control them using the pointer and keyboard, too!</property>
                     <property 
name="image">/org/gnome/Connections/ui/onboarding/remote-computer.svg</property>
                   </object>
                 </child>
@@ -55,15 +55,15 @@
                 <child>
                   <object class="ConnectionsOnboardingDialogPage">
                     <property name="title" translatable="yes">Connect to different operating 
systems</property>
-                    <property name="description" translatable="yes">Connections can be used with Linux, Mac, 
or Windows Desktops.</property>
+                    <property name="description" translatable="yes">Access Linux, Mac, and Windows desktops 
using Connections.</property>
                     <property name="image">/org/gnome/Connections/ui/onboarding/multiplatform.svg</property>
                   </object>
                 </child>
 
                 <child>
                   <object class="ConnectionsOnboardingDialogPage">
-                    <property name="title" translatable="yes">Connections requires a remote 
desktop</property>
-                    <property name="description" translatable="yes">You can connect to a remote desktop that 
has been provided for you, or set up an existing desktop to use.</property>
+                    <property name="title" translatable="yes">Enable remote desktop before 
connecting</property>
+                    <property name="description" translatable="yes">Computers need to be set up for remote 
desktop before you can connect to them.</property>
                     <property 
name="image">/org/gnome/Connections/ui/onboarding/configure-access.svg</property>
                   </object>
                 </child>
@@ -71,6 +71,7 @@
                 <child>
                   <object class="ConnectionsOnboardingDialogPage">
                     <property name="title" translatable="yes">We hope that you enjoy Connections!</property>
+                    <property name="description" translatable="yes">More information can be found in the 
help.</property>
                     <property name="image">/org/gnome/Connections/ui/onboarding/thankyou.svg</property>
                   </object>
                 </child>