[connections/onboarding-adjustments] onboarding: Add additional pages with up-to-date strings



commit 5a11d391d66580e8024238a95863788511cae6b6
Author: Felipe Borges <felipeborges gnome org>
Date:   Wed Aug 11 15:12:29 2021 +0200

    onboarding: Add additional pages with up-to-date strings
    
    See
    
https://gitlab.gnome.org/Teams/Design/app-mockups/-/blob/4bf905a832916c6155ac797f844851fbd3ea711e/connections/connections-onboarding-2.png
    
    Related #59

 src/ui/onboarding-dialog.ui | 25 ++++++++++++++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/src/ui/onboarding-dialog.ui b/src/ui/onboarding-dialog.ui
index 64d4939..7e33197 100644
--- a/src/ui/onboarding-dialog.ui
+++ b/src/ui/onboarding-dialog.ui
@@ -38,27 +38,42 @@
                 <child>
                   <object class="ConnectionsOnboardingDialogPage" id="homepage">
                     <property name="title" translatable="yes">Welcome to Connections</property>
-                    <property name="description" translatable="yes">Connections makes it easy to use other 
desktops remotely.</property>
+                    <property name="description" translatable="yes">Click Next to learn about how it 
works.</property>
                     <property name="image">/org/gnome/Connections/ui/onboarding/welcome.svg</property>
                   </object>
                 </child>
 
                 <child>
                   <object class="ConnectionsOnboardingDialogPage">
-                    <property name="title" translatable="yes">Connect to Linux or Windows</property>
-                    <property name="description" translatable="yes">Remotely access a range of desktop 
operating systems.</property>
+                    <property name="title" translatable="yes">Use other desktops, remotely</property>
+                    <property name="description" translatable="yes">Use Connections to view the screen of 
another desktop, and control it using a pointer and keyboard.</property>
+                    <property 
name="image">/org/gnome/Connections/ui/onboarding/remote-computer.svg</property>
+                  </object>
+                </child>
+
+                <child>
+                  <object class="ConnectionsOnboardingDialogPage">
+                    <property name="title" translatable="yes">Connect to different operating 
systems</property>
+                    <property name="description" translatable="yes">Connections can be used with Linux, Mac, 
or Windows Desktops.</property>
                     <property name="image">/org/gnome/Connections/ui/onboarding/multiplatform.svg</property>
                   </object>
                 </child>
 
                 <child>
                   <object class="ConnectionsOnboardingDialogPage">
-                    <property name="title" translatable="yes">Configure for Access</property>
-                    <property name="description" translatable="yes">To connect to a desktop, it needs to be 
setup first.</property>
+                    <property name="title" translatable="yes">Connections requires a remote 
desktop</property>
+                    <property name="description" translatable="yes">You can connect to a remote desktop that 
has been provided for you, or set up an existing desktop to use.</property>
                     <property 
name="image">/org/gnome/Connections/ui/onboarding/configure-access.svg</property>
                   </object>
                 </child>
 
+                <child>
+                  <object class="ConnectionsOnboardingDialogPage">
+                    <property name="title" translatable="yes">We hope that you enjoy Connections!</property>
+                    <property name="image">/org/gnome/Connections/ui/onboarding/thankyou.svg</property>
+                  </object>
+                </child>
+
               </object>
             </child>
 


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