[release-notes] minor edits to developers

[Link Dupont <link src gnome org>]

commit cb08f2078a1086182ddee7aeb84ec59329b8e5e8
Author: Link Dupont <link sub-pop net>
Date:   Fri Sep 4 08:24:08 2020 -0400

    minor edits to developers

 help/C/developers.page | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/developers.page b/help/C/developers.page
index db2cc4cd..a4fd1ad8 100644
--- a/help/C/developers.page
+++ b/help/C/developers.page
@@ -29,14 +29,14 @@
   <section>
     <title>Boxes</title>
     <p>Boxes is GNOME’s application for managing virtual machines and remote
-    desktop connections. When creating a new virtual machine, Boxes
-    now allows users to manually select the operating system if it fails to do
-    so automatically, rather than falling back to the default “Unknown” virtual
+    desktop connections. When creating a new virtual machine, Boxes now allows
+    users to manually select the operating system if it fails to detect it
+    automatically, rather than falling back to the default “Unknown” virtual
     machine profile. This improves support for operating systems that are
     incompatible with the default profile.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/boxes-xml.png">GNOME Boxes XML editor</media>
-    <p>Boxes now allows editing a virtual machine’s libvirt XML, to allow
-    changing advanced settings that are not available in the user interface.</p>
+    <p>Boxes now allows editing a virtual machine’s libvirt XML, enabling you
+    to change advanced settings that are not available in the user interface.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section>