[release-notes] Tone down a few things

[Matthias Clasen <matthiasc src gnome org>]

commit 8a938949ec7e623d1b56cfa462dec9a2250e155d
Author: Matthias Clasen <mclasen redhat com>
Date:   Thu Sep 3 14:03:49 2020 -0400

    Tone down a few things

 help/C/index.page | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 48971b6b..9845bc48 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
 
   <section>
     <title>New “Welcome” tour</title>
-    <p>GNOME 3.38 comes with a brand-new “Welcome” tour, which gets shown on first
+    <p>GNOME 3.38 comes with a new “Welcome” tour, which gets shown on first
     run, after the initial setup. The tour is primarily there to provide onboarding
     for new users, but it also serves to give a nice welcome to users in their first
     session.</p>
@@ -59,9 +59,9 @@
 
   <section>
     <title>Improved Screen Recording</title>
-    <p>Under the covers, the screen recording infrastructure in GNOME shell
+    <p>Under the covers, the screen recording infrastructure in GNOME Shell
     has been improved to take advantage of pipewire and kernel APIs to reduce
-    the resource consumption and improve responsiveness.</p>
+    resource consumption and improve responsiveness.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section>