[gimp-web] Proofread 2.99.2, minor edits



commit dca4526cd20d390a77867edb3a3fd2b6f646e1fa
Author: Pat David <patdavid gmail com>
Date:   Thu Nov 5 08:42:02 2020 -0600

    Proofread 2.99.2, minor edits
    
    Clean up language a little to be easier for native english speakers.

 content/news/2020/2020-11_GIMP-2.99.2_Released/index.md | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/content/news/2020/2020-11_GIMP-2.99.2_Released/index.md 
b/content/news/2020/2020-11_GIMP-2.99.2_Released/index.md
index 20206f55..5bc70e99 100644
--- a/content/news/2020/2020-11_GIMP-2.99.2_Released/index.md
+++ b/content/news/2020/2020-11_GIMP-2.99.2_Released/index.md
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ Release highlights:
 - Major refactoring and cleanup
 - New plug-in API
 - Plugins now possible with Python 3, JavaScript, Lua, and Vala
-- More space invasion
+- More (color) space invasion
 - Render caching available for better performance
 
 <figure>
@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ Release highlights:
 
 The first difference will be visual as you will notice that GIMP got a
 bit more of a modern look and it can also use some new widgets (instead
-of redevelopping them on GTK2) or some client-side window decorations on
-various dialogs. But the esthetical differences are far from being the
+of redeveloping them on GTK2) or some client-side window decorations on
+various dialogs. But the aesthetic differences are far from being the
 main appeal of GTK3.
 
 <figure>
@@ -46,13 +46,13 @@ main appeal of GTK3.
 
 One of the main issues of GTK2 was the absent support for high pixel
 density displays (e.g. small screens with high resolution or big screens
-with extremely high resolution) which become more widespread nowadays,
+with extremely high resolution) which has become more widespread,
 especially among graphics professionals. GIMP 2.10 came with some
-partial workaround which was acceptable only on some limited cases but
-was not holding expectation for intense usage of the software.
+partial workaround which was acceptable only in some limited cases but
+was not really appropriate for intense use of the software.
 
-GTK3 brings proper support to GIMP whose whole graphical interface will
-follow your system-set scale settings.
+GTK3 brings proper support to GIMP so it will follow your system-set scale
+settings.
 
 *Status*: basically done (except if we forgot any custom widgets).
 


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