[hitori/15-docs: 1/3] help: Update the help to mention the header bar and burger menu



commit 68b80118137953248369a2212c4a6ffa84f11bf8
Author: Philip Withnall <withnall endlessm com>
Date:   Wed Mar 11 14:07:16 2020 +0000

    help: Update the help to mention the header bar and burger menu
    
    Previously, they mentioned the ‘Game’ menu, which hasn’t existed for a
    while. Also tighten up some of the verbs around highlighting and
    hinting.
    
    Signed-off-by: Philip Withnall <withnall endlessm com>
    
    Helps: #15

 help/C/customization.page |  2 +-
 help/C/index.page         |  1 +
 help/C/playing.page       | 11 ++++++-----
 help/C/strategy.page      |  4 ++--
 4 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/customization.page b/help/C/customization.page
index d8204a9..51de5fc 100644
--- a/help/C/customization.page
+++ b/help/C/customization.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
        <title>Customizing the Game</title>
 
        <p>The game can be customized by changing the board size — boards from 5–10 cells square are 
allowed.</p>
-       <p>To change the board size, choose an option from <guiseq><gui style="menu">Game</gui><gui 
style="menuitem">Board Size</gui></guiseq>.
+       <p>To change the board size, press the menu button in the top-right corner of the window, and select 
an option from <gui style="menuitem">Board Size</gui>.
                <app>Hitori</app> will ask if you want to stop the current game if you’re in the middle of 
one, then start a new game with the
                requested board size.</p>
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 6b01c73..532b0ed 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -3,6 +3,7 @@
        <info>
                <revision pkgversion="0.2.4" version="0.2" date="2010-07-14" status="final"/>
                <revision pkgversion="3.31.0" version="0.3" date="2019-02-20" status="final"/>
+               <revision pkgversion="3.36.0" version="0.4" date="2020-03-11" status="final"/>
                <credit type="author copyright">
                        <name>Philip Withnall</name>
                        <email>philip tecnocode co uk</email>
diff --git a/help/C/playing.page b/help/C/playing.page
index c5ea79f..db2e1be 100644
--- a/help/C/playing.page
+++ b/help/C/playing.page
@@ -7,7 +7,8 @@
        </info>
        <title>Playing a Game</title>
 
-       <p>To start a new game, choose <guiseq><gui style="menu">Game</gui><gui style="menuitem">New 
Game</gui></guiseq>. If you are already playing a
+       <p>To start a new game, press the menu button in the top-right corner of the window, and select <gui 
style="menuitem">New Game</gui>.
+               If you are already playing a
                game, <app>Hitori</app> will ask if you want to stop the current game.</p>
        <p>To paint a cell, click on it; to unpaint it again, click on it again. When cells are painted such 
that none
                of the three rules are broken, the game will end and the board may no longer be 
manipulated.</p>
@@ -15,10 +16,10 @@
                <key>Ctrl</key> or <key>Shift</key> and clicking on a cell. They both highlight cells 
differently, and cells can be highlighted in
                both manners at the same time. Highlighted cells can be de-highlighted by clicking on them 
again while holding either <key>Ctrl</key>
                or <key>Shift</key> again.</p>
-       <p>To undo or redo a move, choose <gui style="button">Undo</gui> or
-               <gui style="button">Redo</gui> from the toolbar. You may undo or redo as many moves as you 
like without
+       <p>To undo or redo a move, press <gui style="button">Undo</gui> or
+               <gui style="button">Redo</gui> in the header bar. You may undo or redo as many moves as you 
like without
                restriction.</p>
-       <p>To get a hint on which cells to paint out, choose <gui style="button">Hint</gui> from the toolbar. 
A cell
-               will be highlighted with a flashing red outline. This shows that the current status of the 
cell (painted or unpainted) is incorrect,
+       <p>To get a hint on which cells to paint out, press <gui style="button">Hint</gui> in the header bar. 
A cell
+               will be hinted with a flashing red outline. This shows that the current status of the cell 
(painted or unpainted) is incorrect,
                and should be changed for the game to be won.</p>
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/strategy.page b/help/C/strategy.page
index 8858691..6a5edd7 100644
--- a/help/C/strategy.page
+++ b/help/C/strategy.page
@@ -17,6 +17,6 @@
                cells which violate rule 2. Similarly, groups of cells which violate rule 3 by separating one 
or more unpainted cells from the other
                unpainted cells will be highlighted in red.</p>
 
-       <p>If you get stuck at any point, choose <gui style="button">Hint</gui> from the toolbar for 
<app>Hitori</app>
-               to flag a cell which should be painted or unpainted to move closer to a solution.</p>
+       <p>If you get stuck at any point, press <gui style="button">Hint</gui> in the header bar for 
<app>Hitori</app>
+               to hint a cell which should be painted or unpainted to move closer to a solution.</p>
 </page>


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