[swell-foop] Help wording changes
- From: Robert Roth <robertroth src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [swell-foop] Help wording changes
- Date: Mon, 6 Jul 2020 09:52:53 +0000 (UTC)
commit d1a3f7a8fbcaebc47a8935b992b246a32b97a2ef
Author: Robert Roth <robert roth bee-tf ro>
Date: Mon Jul 6 12:52:39 2020 +0300
Help wording changes
help/C/introduction.page | 6 +++---
help/C/playing-game.page | 13 ++++++-------
help/C/preferences.page | 15 +++++++--------
help/C/score.page | 13 +++++++------
4 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index ff8ed2e..119d26b 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -21,9 +21,9 @@
<title>Introduction</title>
- <p>The goal of the game is to remove as many objects as possible in the
- less number of moves. Objects of the same color that are adjacent to each other get removed
- as a group. The remaining objects then collapse to fill in the gaps and form
+ <p>The goal of the game is to remove as many objects as possible in as few moves as possible.
+ Adjacent objects of the same color form a group, and all objects from a group get removed together.
+ The remaining objects then collapse to fill in the gaps and form
new groups. You cannot remove objects that are not adjacent to another object of the same color.</p>
</page>
diff --git a/help/C/playing-game.page b/help/C/playing-game.page
index ca0a48d..00f05ed 100644
--- a/help/C/playing-game.page
+++ b/help/C/playing-game.page
@@ -19,15 +19,14 @@
</info>
- <title>Play <app>Swell Foop</app></title>
+ <title>Playing <app>Swell Foop</app></title>
- <p>The board starts as a full grid of objects depending on the size of board
- you select. You can remove the tiles as follows:</p>
+ <p>The game starts with a grid of objects depending on the size of board
+ you select. You can clear the board as follows:</p>
<list>
- <item><p>If a group of objects are adjacent and all the same type, then
- they can be removed simply by clicking them or by pressing the
- <key>space bar</key>.</p></item>
- <item><p>Once the group has been removed the objects above them
+ <item><p>You can remove groups of adjacent objects of the same type by clicking
+ any tile of the group or by pressing the <key>space bar</key>.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Once a group has been removed the objects above them
fall down to fill the space. If an entire column is cleared then the objects
slide leftward to fill the gap.</p></item>
</list>
diff --git a/help/C/preferences.page b/help/C/preferences.page
index 5ddb30d..4c086a2 100644
--- a/help/C/preferences.page
+++ b/help/C/preferences.page
@@ -34,13 +34,12 @@
<section id="colors">
<title>Change the number of colors</title>
- <p>You can increase the number of different objects in the game.</p>
+ <p>You can increase the number of different objects in the game</p>
<steps>
<item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Swell Foop</gui>
<gui style="menuitem">Setup</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
- <item><p>The default number of colors is 3. You can increase or decrease
- it from <gui>Number of colors</gui> under <gui>Setup</gui>. The maximum
- number of colors allowed is 4.</p></item>
+ <item><p>The default number of colors is 3. You can change
+ it from <gui>Number of colors</gui> under <gui>Setup</gui>.
</steps>
</section>
@@ -56,13 +55,13 @@
<section id="animation">
<title>Change the speed</title>
- <p>The default animation is designed to be smooth and graceful. If you like
- playing slower then this may be too fast for you. You can slow down
- the gameplay at the expense of animation quality.</p>
+ <p>The default animation is designed to be fast. If it is too fast for you
+ and you would like playing slower then this may be too fast for you.
+ In this case you can slow down the game animation.</p>
<steps>
<item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Swell Foop</gui>
<gui style="menuitem">Appearance</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
- <item><p>To slow down the game, uncheck the <gui style="checkbox">Zealous
+ <item><p>To slow down the animations, uncheck the <gui style="checkbox">Zealous
Animation</gui> checkbox.</p></item>
</steps>
</section>
diff --git a/help/C/score.page b/help/C/score.page
index 86a5701..1bb0e6a 100644
--- a/help/C/score.page
+++ b/help/C/score.page
@@ -21,14 +21,15 @@
<title>Scores</title>
- <p>You can check out your current game scores at the top of the game
- screen. To view scores obtained in previous games:</p>
+ <p>Your current score is visible in the game window titlebar.
+ To view scores obtained in previous games:</p>
<steps>
<item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Swell Foop</gui>
- <gui style="menuitem">Scores</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
- <item><p>The dialog by default displays scores for <gui>6 x 5, 3 colors
- </gui> game. To view others, select the size from the menu whose scores you
- wish to see.</p></item>
+ <gui style="menuitem">High Scores</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
+ <item><p>The dialog by default displays scores for <gui>Small, 3 colors
+ </gui> game. To view the scores for other board sizes, select the board size from
+ the menu at the top of the dialog for the board you
+ wish to see the scores for.</p></item>
</steps>
<section id="scoring">
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