[swell-foop] Help wording changes



commit d1a3f7a8fbcaebc47a8935b992b246a32b97a2ef
Author: Robert Roth <robert roth bee-tf ro>
Date:   Mon Jul 6 12:52:39 2020 +0300

    Help wording changes

 help/C/introduction.page |  6 +++---
 help/C/playing-game.page | 13 ++++++-------
 help/C/preferences.page  | 15 +++++++--------
 help/C/score.page        | 13 +++++++------
 4 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index ff8ed2e..119d26b 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -21,9 +21,9 @@
 
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
-  <p>The goal of the game is to remove as many objects as possible in the
-  less number of moves. Objects of the same color that are adjacent to each other get removed
-  as a group. The remaining objects then collapse to fill in the gaps and form
+  <p>The goal of the game is to remove as many objects as possible in as few moves as possible.
+  Adjacent objects of the same color form a group, and all objects from a group get removed together.
+  The remaining objects then collapse to fill in the gaps and form
   new groups. You cannot remove objects that are not adjacent to another object of the same color.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/playing-game.page b/help/C/playing-game.page
index ca0a48d..00f05ed 100644
--- a/help/C/playing-game.page
+++ b/help/C/playing-game.page
@@ -19,15 +19,14 @@
 
   </info>
 
-  <title>Play <app>Swell Foop</app></title>
+  <title>Playing <app>Swell Foop</app></title>
 
-  <p>The board starts as a full grid of objects depending on the size of board
-  you select. You can remove the tiles as follows:</p>
+  <p>The game starts with a grid of objects depending on the size of board
+  you select. You can clear the board as follows:</p>
   <list>
-    <item><p>If a group of objects are adjacent and all the same type, then
-    they can be removed simply by clicking them or by pressing the
-    <key>space bar</key>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Once the group has been removed the objects above them
+    <item><p>You can remove groups of adjacent objects of the same type by clicking
+    any tile of the group or by pressing the <key>space bar</key>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Once a group has been removed the objects above them
     fall down to fill the space. If an entire column is cleared then the objects
     slide leftward to fill the gap.</p></item>
   </list>
diff --git a/help/C/preferences.page b/help/C/preferences.page
index 5ddb30d..4c086a2 100644
--- a/help/C/preferences.page
+++ b/help/C/preferences.page
@@ -34,13 +34,12 @@
 
   <section id="colors">
   <title>Change the number of colors</title>
-  <p>You can increase the number of different objects in the game.</p>
+  <p>You can increase the number of different objects in the game</p>
   <steps>
     <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Swell Foop</gui>
     <gui style="menuitem">Setup</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>The default number of colors is 3. You can increase or decrease
-    it from <gui>Number of colors</gui> under <gui>Setup</gui>. The maximum
-    number of colors allowed is 4.</p></item>
+    <item><p>The default number of colors is 3. You can change
+    it from <gui>Number of colors</gui> under <gui>Setup</gui>.
   </steps>
   </section>
 
@@ -56,13 +55,13 @@
 
   <section id="animation">
   <title>Change the speed</title>
-  <p>The default animation is designed to be smooth and graceful. If you like
-  playing slower then this may be too fast for you. You can slow down
-  the gameplay at the expense of animation quality.</p>
+  <p>The default animation is designed to be fast. If it is too fast for you
+  and you would like playing slower then this may be too fast for you.
+  In this case you can slow down the game animation.</p>
   <steps>
     <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Swell Foop</gui>
     <gui style="menuitem">Appearance</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>To slow down the game, uncheck the <gui style="checkbox">Zealous
+    <item><p>To slow down the animations, uncheck the <gui style="checkbox">Zealous
     Animation</gui> checkbox.</p></item>
   </steps>
   </section>
diff --git a/help/C/score.page b/help/C/score.page
index 86a5701..1bb0e6a 100644
--- a/help/C/score.page
+++ b/help/C/score.page
@@ -21,14 +21,15 @@
 
   <title>Scores</title>
 
-  <p>You can check out your current game scores at the top of the game
-  screen. To view scores obtained in previous games:</p>
+  <p>Your current score is visible in the game window titlebar.
+  To view scores obtained in previous games:</p>
   <steps>
     <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Swell Foop</gui>
-    <gui style="menuitem">Scores</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>The dialog by default displays scores for <gui>6 x 5, 3 colors
-    </gui> game. To view others, select the size from the menu whose scores you
-    wish to see.</p></item>
+    <gui style="menuitem">High Scores</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>The dialog by default displays scores for <gui>Small, 3 colors
+    </gui> game. To view the scores for other board sizes, select the board size from
+    the menu at the top of the dialog for the board you
+    wish to see the scores for.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
   <section id="scoring">


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