[gnome-user-docs/gl33] gnome-help: Remove "GNOME" branding where feasible



commit 78b026d667dce776f6dc3cdae627e427121acefa
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Sat Apr 18 18:21:20 2020 +0200

    gnome-help: Remove "GNOME" branding where feasible
    
    See #33

 gnome-help/C/a11y-braille.page             | 6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/a11y-screen-reader.page       | 6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/a11y.page                     | 2 +-
 gnome-help/C/color-calibrationdevices.page | 2 +-
 gnome-help/C/color-testing.page            | 4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/look-background.page          | 4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/prefs-sharing.page            | 5 ++---
 gnome-help/C/privacy.page                  | 2 +-
 gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page               | 4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/shell-windows-states.page     | 4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/shell-windows.page            | 2 +-
 gnome-help/C/status-icons.page             | 2 +-
 gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page        | 6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/user-add.page                 | 4 ++--
 14 files changed, 26 insertions(+), 27 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-braille.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-braille.page
index 25587a0b..14bd08cd 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-braille.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-braille.page
@@ -27,9 +27,9 @@
 
   <title>Read screen in Braille</title>
 
-  <p>GNOME provides the <app>Orca</app> screen reader to display the user
-  interface on a refreshable Braille display. Depending on how you installed
-  GNOME, you might not have Orca installed. If not, install Orca first.</p>
+  <p>The <app>Orca</app> screen reader can display the user interface on a
+  refreshable Braille display. Depending on how you installed your system, you
+  might not have Orca installed. If not, install Orca first.</p>
 
   <p if:test="action:install"><link style="button" action="install:orca">Install Orca</link></p>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-screen-reader.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-screen-reader.page
index 64395c08..d8e09787 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-screen-reader.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-screen-reader.page
@@ -26,9 +26,9 @@
 
   <title>Read screen aloud</title>
 
-  <p>GNOME provides the <app>Orca</app> screen reader to speak the user
-  interface. Depending on how you installed GNOME, you might not have
-  Orca installed. If not, install Orca first.</p>
+  <p>The <app>Orca</app> screen reader can speak the user interface. Depending
+  on how you installed your system, you might not have Orca installed. If not,
+  install Orca first.</p>
 
   <p if:test="action:install"><link style="button" action="install:orca">Install Orca</link></p>
   
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y.page
index 3ba12614..cfb37777 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y.page
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
 
   <title>Universal access</title>
 
-  <p>The GNOME desktop includes assistive technologies to support users with
+  <p>The system includes assistive technologies to support users with
   various impairments and special needs, and to interact with common assistive
   devices. An accessibility menu can be added to the top bar, giving easier
   access to many of the accessibility features.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-calibrationdevices.page b/gnome-help/C/color-calibrationdevices.page
index 4798bd9b..7242992f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-calibrationdevices.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-calibrationdevices.page
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
   <title>What color measuring instruments are supported?</title>
 
   <p>
-    GNOME relies on the Argyll color management system to support
+    The system relies on the Argyll color management system to support
     color instruments. Thus the following display measuring instruments
     are supported:
   </p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-testing.page b/gnome-help/C/color-testing.page
index 27dbdaaf..0fe532f5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-testing.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-testing.page
@@ -35,8 +35,8 @@
   <p>The effects of a color profile are sometimes subtle and it may be hard to
   see if anything much has changed.</p>
 
-  <p>GNOME comes with several profiles for testing that make it very clear when
-  the profiles are being applied:</p>
+  <p>The system comes with several profiles for testing that make it very clear
+  when the profiles are being applied:</p>
 
   <terms>
     <item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/look-background.page b/gnome-help/C/look-background.page
index 0f1831a3..098bf99a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/look-background.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/look-background.page
@@ -67,8 +67,8 @@
       <p>There are two ways to change the image used for your backgrounds:</p>
       <list>
         <item>
-          <p>Click one of the many professional background images that ship with
-          GNOME. You can choose <gui>Set Background</gui>, <gui>Set Lock
+          <p>Click one of the background images which are shipped with the
+          system. You can choose <gui>Set Background</gui>, <gui>Set Lock
           Screen</gui>, or <gui>Set Background and Lock Screen</gui>.</p>
         <note style="info">
           <p>Some wallpapers change throughout the day. These wallpapers have a
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/prefs-sharing.page b/gnome-help/C/prefs-sharing.page
index c7fbb358..ab388317 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/prefs-sharing.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/prefs-sharing.page
@@ -27,8 +27,7 @@
 
   <title>Sharing Settings</title>
 
-  <p>The <em>Sharing Settings</em> in GNOME help you control what is shared
-  over the local network, or through other technologies such as
-  <em>Bluetooth</em>.</p>
+  <p>The <em>Sharing Settings</em> help you control what is shared over the
+  local network, or through other technologies such as <em>Bluetooth</em>.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy.page
index ad4bef56..7071c0fa 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy.page
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ TODO: Problem Reporting
 
   <title>Privacy Settings</title>
   
-  <p>The <em>Privacy Settings</em> in GNOME help you control whether or not
+  <p>The <em>Privacy Settings</em> help you control whether or not
   certain parts of your desktop are visible to others. You can also
   use these settings to clear your computer usage history and clean out
   unnecessary files.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
index 871de780..d575f7b5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
@@ -114,8 +114,8 @@
   <title>Suspend</title>
 
   <p>To save power, suspend your computer when you are not using it. If you use
-  a laptop, GNOME, by default, suspends your computer automatically when you
-  close the lid.
+  a laptop, the system, by default, suspends your computer automatically when
+  you close the lid.
   This saves your state to your computer’s memory and powers off most of the
   computer’s functions. A very small amount of power is still used during
   suspend.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-states.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-states.page
index b7a39fb8..dc9607ec 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-states.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-states.page
@@ -24,8 +24,8 @@
   <title>Move and resize windows</title>
 
   <p>You can move and resize windows to help you work more efficiently. In
-  addition to the dragging behavior you might expect, GNOME features shortcuts
-  and modifiers to help you arrange windows quickly.</p>
+  addition to the dragging behavior you might expect, the system features
+  shortcuts and modifiers to help you arrange windows quickly.</p>
 
   <list>
     <item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows.page
index 40a3c0bd..e6b58a33 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows.page
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 
   <title>Windows and workspaces</title>
 
-  <p>Like other desktops, GNOME uses windows to display your running
+  <p>Like other desktops, the system uses windows to display your running
   applications. Using both the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
   overview and the <em>dash</em>, you can launch new applications and control
   active windows.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/status-icons.page b/gnome-help/C/status-icons.page
index 0b7d6b12..b3be4b6f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/status-icons.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/status-icons.page
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
   </info>
 
   <title>What do the icons in the top bar mean?</title>
-<p>This section explains the meaning of icons located on the top right corner of the screen. More 
specifically, the different variations of the icons provided by the GNOME interface are described.</p>
+<p>This section explains the meaning of icons located on the top right corner of the screen. More 
specifically, the different variations of the icons provided by the system are described.</p>
 
 <links type="section"/>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page b/gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page
index 38a51988..562886d8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page
@@ -45,9 +45,9 @@
 
   <section id="characters">
     <title>Characters</title>
-    <p>GNOME comes with a character map application that allows you to
-    find and insert unusual characters, including emoji, by browsing
-    character categories or searching for keywords.</p>
+    <p>The character map application allows you to find and insert unusual
+    characters, including emoji, by browsing character categories or searching
+    for keywords.</p>
 
     <p>You can launch <app>Characters</app> from the Activities overview.</p>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
index 6fa68998..1854d4db 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
@@ -91,8 +91,8 @@
   <note>
     <p>In the <gui>Users</gui> panel, you can click the image next to the
     user’s name to the right to set an image for the account. This image will
-    be shown in the login window. GNOME provides some stock photos you can use,
-    or you can select your own or take a picture with your webcam.</p>
+    be shown in the login window. The system provides some stock photos you can
+    use, or you can select your own or take a picture with your webcam.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>


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