[gnome-user-docs] gnome-help: Update lock screen related docs for 3.36 UI



commit 91c2d2058f660f23047827fda252cddc6985aa95
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Sat Apr 18 17:35:24 2020 +0200

    gnome-help: Update lock screen related docs for 3.36 UI
    
    Fixes #60

 gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page       | 11 ++++++-----
 gnome-help/C/shell-lockscreen.page | 17 +++++++++--------
 2 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
index 7acfe7dc..5e5a1e7e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
@@ -14,6 +14,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.24.2" date="2017-06-11" status="candidate" />
     <revision pkgversion="3.33" date="2019-07-17" status="candidate" />
+    <revision pkgversion="3.36.1" date="2020-04-18" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -91,17 +92,17 @@
 
   <p>If you’re leaving your computer for a short time, you should lock your
   screen to prevent other people from accessing your files or running
-  applications. When you return, raise the
-  <link xref="shell-lockscreen">lock screen</link> curtain and enter your
+  applications. When you return, you will see the
+  <link xref="shell-lockscreen">lock screen</link>. Enter your
   password to log back in. If you don’t lock your screen, it will lock
   automatically after a certain amount of time.</p>
 
   <p>To lock your screen, click the system menu on the right side of the top
-  bar and press the lock screen button at the bottom of the menu.</p>
+  bar and select <gui>Lock</gui> from the menu.</p>
 
   <p>When your screen is locked, other users can log in to their own accounts
-  by clicking <gui>Log in as another user</gui> on the password screen. You
-  can switch back to your desktop when they are finished.</p>
+  by clicking <gui>Log in as another user</gui> at the bottom right of the login
+  screen. You can switch back to your desktop when they are finished.</p>
 
 </section>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-lockscreen.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-lockscreen.page
index ba93fd79..e6a74cc2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-lockscreen.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-lockscreen.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.6.1" date="2012-11-11" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.36.1" date="2020-04-18" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -25,12 +26,11 @@
 
   <p>The lock screen means that you can see what is happening while your
   computer is locked, and it allows you to get a summary of what has been
-  happening while you have been away. The lock screen curtain shows an
-  attractive image on the screen while your computer is locked, and provides
+  happening while you have been away. The lock screen provides
   useful information:</p>
 
   <list>
-    <item><p>the name of the logged-in user</p></item>
+<!--<item><p>the name of the logged-in user</p></item> -->
     <item><p>date and time, and certain notifications</p></item>
     <item><p>battery and network status</p></item>
 <!-- No media control anymore on lock screen, see BZ #747787: 
@@ -38,12 +38,13 @@
     track or pause your music without having to enter a password</p></item> -->
   </list>
 
-  <p>To unlock your computer, raise the lock screen curtain by dragging it
-  upward with the cursor, or by pressing <key>Esc</key> or <key>Enter</key>.
+  <p>To unlock your computer, click once with your mouse or touchpad, or press
+  <key>Esc</key> or <key>Enter</key>.
   This will reveal the login screen, where you can enter your password to
-  unlock. Alternatively, just start typing your password and the curtain will
-  be automatically raised as you type. You can also switch users if your
-  computer is configured for more than one.</p>
+  unlock. Alternatively, just start typing your password and the login screen
+  will be automatically shown as you type. You can also switch users at the
+  bottom right of the login screen if your system is configured for more than
+  one.</p>
 
   <p>To hide notifications from the lock screen, see
   <link xref="shell-notifications#lock-screen-notifications"/>.</p>


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