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[gnome-user-docs/wip/mdh: 2/2] Settings: update display pages

commit 5e4622bf416f582757914bb995ee36896869464b
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Tue Nov 12 18:43:51 2019 -0500

    Settings: update display pages

 gnome-help/C/display-blank.page         | 10 +++---
 gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page | 15 +++------
 gnome-help/C/display-night-light.page   | 21 +++++++------
 gnome-help/C/look-background.page       | 55 ++++++++++++++++-----------------
 gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page       | 14 +++++++--
 gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page          | 10 +++---
 gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page   |  9 +++---
 7 files changed, 65 insertions(+), 69 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-blank.page b/gnome-help/C/display-blank.page
index f5f8d465..440bf861 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-blank.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-blank.page
@@ -13,6 +13,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-30" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.20" date="2016-06-15" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-22" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.34" date="2019-10-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author editor">
       <name>Petr Kovar</name>
@@ -37,14 +38,11 @@
   <steps>
     <title>To set the screen blanking time:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
+      overview and start typing <gui>Power</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Power</gui> in the sidebar.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Power</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Use the <gui>Blank screen</gui> drop-down list under <gui>Power
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
index eb5ea013..e2f1236d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-23" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-28" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.34" date="2019-11-12" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -86,17 +87,11 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
-      overview and start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Displays</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Devices</gui> in the sidebar.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Displays</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Displays</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>In the display arrangement diagram, drag your displays to the relative
@@ -116,7 +111,7 @@
       </note>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the resolution or scale, and choose the orientation.</p>
+      <p>Select the orientation, resolution or scale, and refresh rate.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui>Apply</gui>. The new settings will be applied for 20
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-night-light.page b/gnome-help/C/display-night-light.page
index a6c806f1..132ce09d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-night-light.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-night-light.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-28" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.33.3" date="2019-07-21" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.34" date="2019-11-11" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -29,16 +30,10 @@
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
-      overview and start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      overview and start typing <gui>Displays</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Devices</gui> in the sidebar.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Displays</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Displays</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui>Night Light</gui> to open the settings.</p>
@@ -47,12 +42,18 @@
       <p>Press <gui>Sunset to Sunrise</gui> to make the screen color follow the
       sunset and sunrise times for your location. Press the <gui>Manual</gui>
       button to set the times to a custom schedule.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Use the slider to adjust the <gui>Color Temperature</gui> to be more
+      warm or less warm.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
       <note>
         <p>The <link xref="shell-introduction">top bar</link> shows when
         <gui>Night Light</gui> is active. It can be temporarily disabled from
         the system menu.</p>
       </note>
-    </item>
-  </steps>
+
+
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/look-background.page b/gnome-help/C/look-background.page
index 1f776f6e..0f1831a3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/look-background.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/look-background.page
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-07" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-04-09" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.34" date="2019-11-12" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -46,55 +47,51 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Set an image, color, or gradient as your desktop background or lock
-    screen background.</desc>
+    <desc>Set an image as your desktop background or lock screen background.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Change the desktop and lock screen backgrounds</title>
 
-  <p>You can change the image used for your backgrounds or set it to be a
-  solid color.</p>
+  <p>To change the image used for your backgrounds:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
+      overview and start typing <gui>Background</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Background</gui> to open the panel. The current
+      selections for Background and Lock Screen are shown at the top.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Background</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Background</gui> or <gui>Lock Screen</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>There are three choices displayed on top:</p>
+      <p>There are two ways to change the image used for your backgrounds:</p>
       <list>
         <item>
-          <p>Select <gui>Wallpapers</gui> to use one of the many professional
-          background images that ship with GNOME. Some wallpapers change
-          throughout the day. These wallpapers have a small clock icon in the
-          bottom-right corner.</p>
-        </item>
-        <item>
-          <p>Select <gui>Pictures</gui> to use one of your own photos from your
-          <file>Pictures</file> folder. Most photo management applications
-          store photos there. If you would like to use an image that is not in
-          your <file>Pictures</file> folder, either use <app>Files</app> by
-          right-clicking on the image file and selecting <gui>Set as
-          Wallpaper</gui>, or <app>Image Viewer</app> by opening the image
-          file, clicking the menu button in the titlebar and selecting <gui>Set
-          as Wallpaper</gui>.</p>
+          <p>Click one of the many professional background images that ship with
+          GNOME. You can choose <gui>Set Background</gui>, <gui>Set Lock
+          Screen</gui>, or <gui>Set Background and Lock Screen</gui>.</p>
+        <note style="info">
+          <p>Some wallpapers change throughout the day. These wallpapers have a
+          small clock icon in the bottom-right corner.</p>
+        </note>
         </item>
         <item>
-          <p>Select <gui>Colors</gui> to just use a flat color.</p>
+          <p>Click <gui>Add Picture...</gui> to use one of your own photos from
+          your <file>Pictures</file> folder. Most photo management applications
+          store photos there.</p>
         </item>
       </list>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>The settings are applied immediately.</p>
+        <note style="tip">
+          <p>If you would like to use an image that is not in your
+          <file>Pictures</file> folder, right-click on the image file in
+          <app>Files</app> and select <gui>Set as Wallpaper</gui>, or open the
+          image file in <app>Image Viewer</app>, click the menu button in the
+          titlebar and select <gui>Set as Wallpaper</gui>. This will affect only
+          the desktop background.</p>
+        </note>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p><link xref="shell-workspaces-switch">Switch to an empty
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page b/gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page
index 669857a7..1d6eb1ba 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-19" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.33" date="2019-07-19" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.34" date="2019-11-12" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -66,7 +67,7 @@
       area.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the resolution or scale, and choose the orientation.</p>
+      <p>Select the orientation, resolution or scale, and refresh rate.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui>Apply</gui>. The new settings will be applied for 20
@@ -104,12 +105,19 @@
 
 </section>
 
+<section id="refresh">
+  <title>Refresh Rate</title>
+
+  <p>The refresh rate is the number of times per second the screen image is
+  drawn, or refreshed.</p>
+</section>
+
 <section id="scale">
   <title>Scale</title>
 
   <p>The scale setting increases the size of objects shown on the screen to
-  match the density of your display, making them easier to read. Choose from
-  <gui>100%</gui>, <gui>200%</gui>, or <gui>300%</gui>.</p>
+  match the density of your display, making them easier to read. Choose
+  <gui>100%</gui> or <gui>200%</gui>.</p>
 
 </section>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page b/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page
index 9ff2965f..e5022764 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-29" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.20" date="2016-06-15" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-28" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.34" date="2019-10-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -48,16 +49,13 @@
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
-      overview and start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      overview and start typing <gui>Power</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Power</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Power</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Switch the <gui>Dim screen when inactive</gui> switch to off in the
+      <p>Switch the <gui>Dim Screen When Inactive</gui> switch to off in the
       <gui>Power Saving</gui> section.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page b/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
index b93726c3..22046ca9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-03" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.34" date="2019-11-12" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -44,13 +45,11 @@
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      start typing <gui>Privacy</gui>.</p>
     </item>
+
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Privacy</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Privacy</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Press on <gui>Screen Lock</gui>.</p>
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