[totem/mallard-documentation: 21/98] help: Final review of introduction.page



commit 6b60c8d4d9f2ef89fcedfc4cf5bf2b0ee37b5d72
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Fri Mar 29 20:11:34 2013 +0000

    help: Final review of introduction.page
    
    Add revision tag, update Totem to Videos, slight rewording.

 help/C/introduction.page | 24 +++++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index dbedfe88a..bffeb28e5 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -3,11 +3,9 @@
       id="introduction">
 
   <info>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="candidate"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index"/>
 
-    <desc>Welcome to the <app>Totem Movie Player</app>, the GNOME application
-    for playing music and movies.</desc>
-
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Marta Bogdanowicz</name>
       <email>majus85 gmail com</email>
@@ -20,24 +18,28 @@
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
+
+    <desc>Welcome to the <app>Videos</app>, the GNOME application for playing movies and music.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
-  <p><app>Totem Movie Player</app> is an application for playing media, it can
-  play video, as well as audio. You can use it to watch movies, listen
-  to music, create playlists or stream media from the Internet.</p>
+  <p><app>Totem</app>, also known as <app>Videos</app> is an application for
+  playing media; it can play video, as well as audio. You can use it to watch
+  movies, listen to music, create playlists or stream media from the
+  Internet.</p>
 
   <note style="advanced">
-    <p><app>Totem</app> is based on <gui>GStreamer</gui>, a plugin-based
-    multimedia framework. Thanks to <gui>GStreamer</gui>, <app>Totem</app> has
-    superior extensibility and supports a larger variety of media formats.</p>
+    <p><app>Videos</app> is based on <gui>GStreamer</gui>, a plugin-based
+    multimedia framework. Thanks to <gui>GStreamer</gui>, <app>Videos</app>
+    has superior extensibility and supports a larger variety of media
+    formats.</p>
   </note>
 
   <figure>
-    <title><gui>Totem Movie Player</gui> main window</title>
+    <title><gui>Videos</gui> main window</title>
     <media type="image" mime="image/png" src="figures/totem-main-window.png">
-    <p>Screenshot of the <app>Totem Movie Player</app> main window.</p>
+    <p>Screenshot of the <app>Videos</app> main window.</p>
     </media>
   </figure>
 


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