[release-notes/gnome-3-34] Clarify some silly English



commit 99b263ccaf112f81a47f0666feefc8c65ed07d94
Author: Link Dupont <link sub-pop net>
Date:   Wed Aug 28 20:28:08 2019 -0400

    Clarify some silly English

 help/C/developers.page | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/developers.page b/help/C/developers.page
index a40395b0..bf80c34d 100644
--- a/help/C/developers.page
+++ b/help/C/developers.page
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
     resulting in better I/O performance and a more secure installation process.</p>
     <p>Additionally, preconfigured remotes now use regular <code>.flatpakrepo</code> files
     instead of custom <code>.conf</code> files. This streamlines the process for preconfigured
-    remotes, resulting in them being identical to manually added remotes.</p>
+    remotes; they are now identical to manually added remotes.</p>
     <p><link href="https://flathub.org/";>Flathub</link>, a Flatpak application
     distribution service, is growing steadily. It now hosts over 600 applications.</p>
   </section>
@@ -46,8 +46,8 @@
   <section id="builder">
     <title>Builder</title>
     <media type="image" width="940" src="figures/builder-dbus.png"/>
-    <p><app>Builder</app>, a GNOME IDE, continues to add new features and improve
-    itself. This release, it gained a number of useful features.</p>
+    <p><app>Builder</app>, a GNOME IDE, continues to add new features. This release,
+    it gained a number of useful features.</p>
     <p>The development environment now features an integrated D-Bus inspector. This inspector
     can be opened via the <em>Switch Surface</em> button (in the top left corner
     of the project window).</p>
@@ -88,7 +88,8 @@
     <p>Other improvements in GNOME &gnomeversion; include:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p><app>GLib</app> deprecated the use of the <code>gtester</code> utility
-      and its test reporting format. TAP output is now default.</p></item>
+      and its test reporting format. <link href="https://testanything.org";>TAP</link>
+      output is now default.</p></item>
       <item><p><app>GArray</app> and <app>GPtrArray</app> introduced some
       new functions: <code>g_array_copy</code>, <code>g_array_binary_search</code>,
       <code>g_ptr_array_copy</code>, <code>g_ptr_array_extend</code>, and


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