[release-notes/gnome-3-34] Rewrite a section of music

[Link Dupont <link src gnome org>]

commit 7f03373fe85fc23f4b480b38e8452a391b507e54
Author: Link Dupont <link sub-pop net>
Date:   Wed Aug 28 15:41:38 2019 -0400

    Rewrite a section of music

 help/C/index.page | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 1117cde3..69f38f96 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -105,11 +105,11 @@
     <p><app>Music</app> now watches tracked sources (such as the <em>Music</em>
     folder in your <em>Home</em> directory) for new or changed files and will
     update automatically.</p>
-    <p>A lot of work went in to improving the underlying core of the application.
-    This resulted in, among other things, gapless playback. Many albums are
-    intended to be listened to as a whole and splitting it up into tracks breaks
-    that playback. Gapless playback now enables those albums to be listened to
-    as they were meant to be heard.</p>
+    <p>A major rewrite of the core components landed this release cycle, resulting
+    in, among other things, gapless playback. Many albums are intended to be
+    listened to as a whole and splitting it up into tracks breaks that playback.
+    Gapless playback now enables those albums to be listened to as they were
+    meant to be heard.</p>
     <p>And finally, the album, artist and playlist views have been updated with
     a more refined layout.</p>
   </section>