[gnome-getting-started-docs] Minor content updates



commit ae5c17c9579b3fef9b225ed579fa2ef7f78c5c52
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date:   Sun Aug 4 18:59:28 2019 +0200

    Minor content updates

 figures/gs-datetime.svg                        | 2 +-
 gnome-help/C/gs-browse-web.page                | 8 ++++----
 gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page | 6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/gs-datetime.svg                   | 4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page         | 9 ++++-----
 5 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/figures/gs-datetime.svg b/figures/gs-datetime.svg
index 67b4cf4..69b35fa 100644
--- a/figures/gs-datetime.svg
+++ b/figures/gs-datetime.svg
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@
            x="122.29289"
            id="tspan11018"
            sodipodi:role="line"
-           style="font-size:14px;line-height:1.25">4</tspan></text>
+           style="font-size:14px;line-height:1.25">3</tspan></text>
     </g>
     <g
        style="display:inline"
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-browse-web.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-browse-web.page
index 4ff7ae6..de6d06d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-browse-web.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-browse-web.page
@@ -36,8 +36,8 @@
 </if:when>
 
 <!--Distributors might want to add their distro here if they ship Firefox by default.-->
-<if:when test="platform:centos, platform:debian, platform:fedora, platform:rhel, platform:ubuntu,
-platform:opensuse, platform:sled, platform:sles">
+<if:when test="platform:centos, platform:debian, platform:fedora, platform:rhel,
+platform:ubuntu, platform:opensuse, platform:sled, platform:sles">
 
     <media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg"
     src="gs-web-browser1-firefox.svg" width="100%" />
@@ -79,8 +79,8 @@ platform:opensuse, platform:sled, platform:sles">
 </if:choose>
 
 <!--Distributors might want to add their distro here if they ship Firefox by default.-->
-<if:if test="platform:gnome-classic, platform:centos, platform:debian, platform:fedora,
-platform:rhel, platform:ubuntu, platform:opensuse, platform:sled, platform:sles">
+<if:if test="platform:centos, platform:debian, platform:fedora,platform:rhel,
+platform:ubuntu, platform:opensuse, platform:sled, platform:sles">
 
     <media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg"
     src="gs-web-browser2-firefox.svg" width="100%" />
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
index 17a9976..004f8e5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
@@ -27,14 +27,14 @@
     <item><p>Click the <gui xref="shell-introduction#yourname">system menu</gui>
     on the right side of the top bar.</p></item>
     <item><p>Click the settings button at the bottom left of the menu.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui>Details</gui><gui>Date &amp; Time</gui></guiseq>
-    from the sidebar.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
   <media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg"
   src="gs-datetime.svg" width="100%" />
-  
+
   <steps style="continues">
+    <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui>Details</gui><gui>Date &amp; Time</gui></guiseq>
+    from the sidebar.</p></item>
     <item><p>Make sure that the <gui>Automatic Time Zone</gui> item is switched
      off, and then click the <gui>Time Zone</gui> item below.</p></item>
     <item><p>Click on your location on the world map. This selects your current
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-datetime.svg b/gnome-help/C/gs-datetime.svg
index eb6c3f7..805ec9b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-datetime.svg
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-datetime.svg
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
   <ns0:g id="layer2" transform="translate(0,-540)" ns1:groupmode="layer" ns1:label="fg">
     <ns0:g id="g11020" transform="translate(-89,-139.36217)">
       <ns0:circle cx="120" cy="278" id="path11014" r="17" 
style="color:#000000;display:inline;overflow:visible;visibility:visible;fill:#000000;fill-opacity:0.27522936;stroke:none;stroke-width:1.06985807;marker:none;enable-background:accumulate"
 transform="translate(2,453.36217)" />
-      <ns0:text id="text11016" 
style="font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:bold;font-stretch:normal;line-height:0%;font-family:Cantarell;-inkscape-font-specification:'Cantarell
 
Bold';text-align:center;letter-spacing:0px;word-spacing:0px;writing-mode:lr-tb;text-anchor:middle;fill:#ffffff;fill-opacity:1;stroke:none"
 x="122.29289" y="736.36218" xml:space="preserve"><ns0:tspan id="tspan11018" 
style="font-size:14px;line-height:1.25" x="122.29289" y="736.36218" ns2:role="line">4</ns0:tspan></ns0:text>
+      <ns0:text id="text11016" 
style="font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:bold;font-stretch:normal;line-height:0%;font-family:Cantarell;-inkscape-font-specification:'Cantarell
 
Bold';text-align:center;letter-spacing:0px;word-spacing:0px;writing-mode:lr-tb;text-anchor:middle;fill:#ffffff;fill-opacity:1;stroke:none"
 x="122.29289" y="736.36218" xml:space="preserve"><ns0:tspan id="tspan11018" 
style="font-size:14px;line-height:1.25" x="122.29289" y="736.36218" ns2:role="line">3</ns0:tspan></ns0:text>
     </ns0:g>
     <ns0:g id="g4890" style="display:inline" 
transform="matrix(2.6833333,0,0,2.6833333,-1275.5101,-1072.8539)">
       <ns0:path d="m 506.43234,611.75299 h 258.32299 c 2.21601,0 4,1.784 4,4 v 161.22982 h -4 -258.32299 -4 
V 615.75299 c 0,-2.216 1.784,-4 4,-4 z" id="path5430" 
style="display:inline;fill:#ffffff;fill-opacity:1;stroke:#000000;stroke-width:2;stroke-miterlimit:4;stroke-opacity:1"
 ns2:nodetypes="sssccccss" ns1:connector-curvature="0" />
@@ -119,4 +119,4 @@
     <ns0:rect height="29.303314" id="rect3923" rx="14.65165" ry="14.65165" 
style="display:inline;fill:#000000;fill-opacity:1;stroke:none;stroke-width:1" width="53.140442" x="655.56671" 
y="645.81787" />
     <ns0:circle cx="693.00433" cy="660.46039" id="path915" r="11.844038" 
style="opacity:1;vector-effect:none;fill:#ffffff;fill-opacity:1;stroke:none;stroke-width:16;stroke-linecap:round;stroke-linejoin:round;stroke-miterlimit:4;stroke-dasharray:none;stroke-dashoffset:0;stroke-opacity:1;marker:none;marker-start:none;marker-mid:none;marker-end:none;paint-order:normal"
 />
   </ns0:g>
-</ns0:svg>
\ No newline at end of file
+</ns0:svg>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page
index bb95c5c..e4c5aec 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
       src="gs-search-settings.svg" width="100%" />
 
       <note style="important">
-      <p>GNOME lets you customize what you want to display in the search
+      <p>Your computer lets you customize what you want to display in the search
        results in the <gui>Activities Overview</gui>. For example, you can
         choose whether you want to show results for websites, photos, or music.
         </p>
@@ -93,11 +93,10 @@
         on the right side of the top bar.</p></item>
         <item><p>Click the settings button at the bottom left of the menu.</p></item>
         <item><p>Click <gui>Search</gui> in the left panel.</p></item>
-        <item><p>In the list of search locations, click the <gui>ON/OFF</gui>
-         switch next to the search location you want to enable or disable.</p>
-         </item>
+        <item><p>In the list of search locations, click the switch next to the
+        search location you want to enable or disable.</p></item>
       </steps>
-      
+
     </section>
 
 </page>


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