[gimp-web/testing] Minor edits to 2.10.8 release news

[Pat David <patdavid src gnome org>]

commit c88bda3039ac5386a4ba5c1cb0d28f5a2a01973f
Author: Pat David <patdavid gmail com>
Date:   Thu Nov 8 13:34:49 2018 -0600

    Minor edits to 2.10.8 release news

 content/news/2018-09_GIMP-2.10.8_Released/index.md | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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@@ -74,12 +74,12 @@ support [Øyvind on Patreon](https://www.patreon.com/pippin)!
 ### GIMP in University
 
 Aryeom, well known around here for being the director of [ZeMarmot
-movie](https://film.zemarmot.net/en/), a skilled illustrator and a
+movie](https://film.zemarmot.net/en/), a skilled illustrator, and a
 contributor to GIMP has given a graphics course with GIMP as a guest
 teacher for nearly a week at the *Université de Cergy-Pontoise* in
 France, mid-October.
 
-She taught to 2 classes, a computer graphics class and a 3D heritage one,
+She taught to two classes: a computer graphics class and a 3D heritage one,
 focusing on digital illustration for the former and
 retouching for the later.
 
@@ -114,14 +114,14 @@ macOS (the other being on Linux), and we discovered 2 very annoying bugs
 by [Jehan](https://gitlab.gnome.org/GNOME/gimp/issues/1924) (also from
 *ZeMarmot* project) and [Ell](https://gitlab.gnome.org/GNOME/gegl/issues/104).
 
-We remind that we have very few developers for macOS and Windows and we
+Keep in mind that we have very few developers for macOS and Windows and we
 welcome new contributors if you want GIMP to be well supported on your
 operating system of choice!
 
 ### Flatpak statistics
 
-Though Flathub does not provide (yet) any public statistics for packages,
-some internal source told us that there have been over 214,000 downloads of GIMP
+Although Flathub does not (yet) provide any public statistics for packages,
+an internal source told us that there have been over 214,000 downloads of GIMP
 since its existence ([2017/10](https://twitter.com/zemarmot/status/920045077992476673)).
 This is more than 500 downloads a day, and by far the most downloaded flathub application!