[release-notes/gnome-3-28] corrections based on feedback from Alexandre

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 4748d830e9527070f544aecb75a31996678040e5
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Thu Mar 1 11:16:10 2018 +0000

    corrections based on feedback from Alexandre

 help/C/developers.page |    3 ++-
 help/C/index.page      |    9 ++++-----
 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/developers.page b/help/C/developers.page
index 01866da..5c68d9d 100644
--- a/help/C/developers.page
+++ b/help/C/developers.page
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
     <title>Builder</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
       <p>Builder's 3.28 release includes some handy new features, important refinements, and significant 
reliability improvements.</p>
-      <p>The navigation sidebar has had a number of improvements. The file tree is now monitored in real 
time, so that changes are immediately reflected in the sidebar. It is also possible to drag and drop files in 
the sidebar, in order to move them (it's also possible to drag files on to the editor to open them). Finally, 
Git status is shown in the sidebar, so it's easy to see which files have been changed.</p>
+      <p>The navigation sidebar has had a number of improvements. The file tree is now monitored in real 
time, so that file changes are immediately reflected in the sidebar. It is also possible to move files using 
drag and drop, and Git status is shown, so it's easy to see which files have been changed.</p>
       <p>Builder's Flatpak support has also been improved for 3.28. Progress feedback is now shown when 
building, SDK extensions are now supported, and <cmd>flatpak-builder</cmd> is bundled as part of the Builder 
flatpak, so that it doesn't need to be separately installed.</p>
       <p>Assorted other improvements in this release include:</p>
       <list>
@@ -37,6 +37,7 @@
         <item><p>Three-finger-swipe can now be used to move pages left or right.</p></item>
         <item><p>Builder tries to avoid building projects immediately upon opening, and no longer 
auto-updates dependencies upon loading.</p></item>
         <item><p>Terminals now show color text output.</p></item>
+        <item><p>Files can be dropped on to the editor window in order to open them in Builder.</p></item>
         <item><p>Builder now makes it even easier to contribute to existing GNOME applications, with a 
selection of featured apps that can be picked from project selection screen.</p></item>
         <item><p>New project templates are now included, including a Mono-based Gtk♯ application.</p></item>
       </list>
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 0cb70c8..47a3837 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -32,8 +32,7 @@
   release incorporates &gitcommits; changes, made by approximately &gitauthors;
   contributors.</p>
 
-  <p>&gnomeversion; has been named “Chongqing” in recognition of this year’s
-  <link href="https://2017.gnome.asia/";>GNOME.Asia</link> organizing team. GNOME.Asia is GNOME's official 
annual summit in Asia, which is only possible thanks to the hard work of local volunteers. This year's event 
was held in Chongqing, China, and we'd like to thank everyone who contributed to its success.</p>
+  <p>&gnomeversion; has been named “Chongqing” in recognition of the team behind <link 
href="https://2017.gnome.asia/";>GNOME.Asia 2017</link>. GNOME.Asia is GNOME's official annual summit in Asia, 
which is only possible thanks to the hard work of local volunteers. This year's event was held in Chongqing, 
China, and we'd like to thank everyone who contributed to its success.</p>
 
   <section id="favorites">
     <title>Choose Your Favorites</title>
@@ -50,7 +49,7 @@
       <item><p>In <app>Clocks</app>, it's now possible to add the UTC timezone to your world 
times.</p></item>
       <item><p>The <app>Contacts</app> application now allows sorting by either surname or first name. It 
also has a new shortcuts window and a number of interface improvements.</p></item>
       <item><p>The month view in <app>Calendar</app> has been improved. Events are presented in a way that's 
easier to read, and it's now possible to seamlessly expand cells which are overflowing with events.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Weather information has been added to the <app>Calendar</app> application, so it's possible 
to see what the forecast alongside your events .</p></item>
+      <item><p>Weather information has been added to the <app>Calendar</app> application, so it's possible 
to see the forecast alongside your events.</p></item>
       <item><p><app>To Do</app> has an updated task view design, which makes it easy to reorder tasks with 
drag and drop. Todoist integration has also been improved.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
@@ -82,9 +81,9 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="on-screen-keyboard">
-    <title>All-New Screen Keyboard</title>
+    <title>All-New On-Screen Keyboard</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>GNOME's screen keyboard has been completely rewritten for 3.28, and it is far easier to use than the 
previous version. The new keyboard automatically activates when a text area is selected, and the view is 
shifted to ensure that the text area is visible while typing. A variety of layouts are supported for 
different locales.</p>
+    <p>GNOME's on-screen keyboard has been completely rewritten for 3.28, and it is far easier to use than 
the previous version. The new keyboard automatically activates when a text area is selected, and the view is 
shifted to ensure that the text area is visible while typing. A variety of layouts are supported for 
different locales.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="Usage">