[gnome-photos] appdata, doap: Improve the description

[Debarshi Ray <debarshir src gnome org>]

commit c5c15abf4f9f99cf867db7a32671c3cd5bd07524
Author: Nick Richards <nick richards gmail com>
Date:   Tue Jun 5 11:21:07 2018 +0000

    appdata, doap: Improve the description
    
    ... by better describing the application as it now is, removing
    redundant text, tweaking the tone of voice to make it more confident,
    and encouraging users to install it.
    
    Some changes by Debarshi Ray.
    
    https://gitlab.gnome.org/GNOME/gnome-photos/merge_requests/39

 data/org.gnome.Photos.appdata.xml.in | 20 +++++++++++---------
 gnome-photos.doap                    |  8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/data/org.gnome.Photos.appdata.xml.in b/data/org.gnome.Photos.appdata.xml.in
index ebbd35dd..407bef34 100644
--- a/data/org.gnome.Photos.appdata.xml.in
+++ b/data/org.gnome.Photos.appdata.xml.in
@@ -8,20 +8,22 @@
   <summary>Access, organize and share your photos on GNOME</summary>
   <description>
     <p>
-      A simple application to access, organize and share your photos on
-      GNOME. It is meant to be a simple and elegant replacement for using a
-      file manager to deal with photos. Seamless cloud integration is offered
-      through GNOME Online Accounts.
+      Access, organize and share your photos on GNOME. A simple and elegant
+      replacement for using a file manager to deal with photos. Enhance, crop
+      and edit in a snap. Seamless cloud integration is offered through GNOME
+      Online Accounts.
     </p>
-    <p>It lets you:</p>
+    <p>You can:</p>
     <ul>
+      <li>Automatically find all your pictures</li>
       <li>View recent local and online photos</li>
-      <li>Access your Facebook or Flickr content</li>
-      <li>Send photos to remote DLNA renderers</li>
-      <li>Set as background</li>
+      <li>Access your Facebook or Flickr pictures</li>
+      <li>View photos on TVs, laptops or other DLNA renderers on your local
+          network</li>
+      <li>Set pictures as your desktop background</li>
       <li>Print photos</li>
       <li>Select favorites</li>
-      <li>Allow opening full featured editor for more advanced changes</li>
+      <li>Easily edit your pictures in the app, or send to a full featured editor for more advanced 
changes</li>
     </ul>
   </description>
   <kudos>
diff --git a/gnome-photos.doap b/gnome-photos.doap
index 833eb059..41c535eb 100644
--- a/gnome-photos.doap
+++ b/gnome-photos.doap
@@ -11,10 +11,10 @@
     Access, organize and share your photos on GNOME
   </shortdesc>
   <description xml:lang="en">
-    A simple application to access, organize and share your photos on
-    GNOME. It is meant to be a simple and elegant replacement for using a
-    file manager to deal with photos. Seamless cloud integration is offered
-    through GNOME Online Accounts.
+    Access, organize and share your photos on GNOME. A simple and elegant
+    replacement for using a file manager to deal with photos. Enhance, crop
+    and edit in a snap. Seamless cloud integration is offered through GNOME
+    Online Accounts.
   </description>
 
   <homepage rdf:resource="https://wiki.gnome.org/Apps/Photos"; />