[gnome-user-docs/wip/mdh] Settings update: clock-, display-, wacom-pages



commit 6c5e9a159df71fb9b89cadea7b9e5a79e418b746
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Mon Jul 30 10:05:09 2018 -0400

    Settings update: clock-, display-, wacom-pages

 gnome-help/C/clock-set.page             | 13 ++++--
 gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page        | 13 ++++--
 gnome-help/C/clock-world.page           |  7 +--
 gnome-help/C/display-blank.page         | 10 +++--
 gnome-help/C/display-brightness.page    |  8 +++-
 gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page | 76 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++------
 gnome-help/C/display-night-light.page   | 57 +++++++++++++++++++++++++
 gnome-help/C/look-background.page       | 10 +++--
 gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page    | 73 ++++++++++++++-----------------
 gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page       | 46 ++++++++++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page          | 12 ++++--
 gnome-help/C/prefs-display.page         | 11 +++--
 gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page   |  8 +++-
 gnome-help/C/wacom-left-handed.page     | 16 +++++--
 gnome-help/C/wacom-mode.page            | 14 +++++-
 gnome-help/C/wacom-multi-monitor.page   | 16 +++++--
 gnome-help/C/wacom-stylus.page          | 33 ++++++++------
 gnome-help/Makefile.am                  |  1 +
 18 files changed, 315 insertions(+), 109 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
index 3ff847f9..f99433c2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-04-09" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -32,11 +33,17 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>      
-      overview and start typing <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Details</gui> in the sidebar.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If you have <gui>Automatic Date &amp; Time</gui> set to <gui>ON</gui>,
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
index b66f066e..f115b9d2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.16" date="2015-01-26" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-04-09" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -38,11 +39,17 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>      
-      overview and start typing <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Details</gui> in the sidebar.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If you have <gui>Automatic Time Zone</gui> set to <gui>ON</gui>, your
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-world.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-world.page
index 194eed08..f4dab20d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-world.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-world.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     </link>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-30" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -30,16 +31,16 @@
     <p>Most distributions come with <app>Clocks</app> installed by default.
     If yours does not, you may need to install it using your distribution’s
     package manager.</p>
- </note>
+  </note>
 
   <p>To add a world clock:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on the clock on the top bar.</p>
+      <p>Click the clock on the top bar.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the <gui>Add world clocks…</gui> link under the calendar to
+      <p>Click the <gui>Add world clock</gui> link under the calendar to
       launch <app>Clocks</app>.</p>
 
     <note>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-blank.page b/gnome-help/C/display-blank.page
index dc07f747..f5f8d465 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-blank.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-blank.page
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-30" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.20" date="2016-06-15" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-22" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author editor">
       <name>Petr Kovar</name>
@@ -36,11 +37,14 @@
   <steps>
     <title>To set the screen blanking time:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
-      overview and start typing <gui>Power</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Power</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Power</gui> in the sidebar.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Use the <gui>Blank screen</gui> drop-down list under <gui>Power
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-brightness.page b/gnome-help/C/display-brightness.page
index 2098f256..6bf81294 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-brightness.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-brightness.page
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.4" date="2013-03-28" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-30" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -65,10 +66,13 @@
     <title>To set the screen brightness using the Power panel:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
-      overview and start typing <gui>Power</gui>.</p>
+      overview and start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Power</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Power</gui> in the sidebar.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Adjust the <gui>Screen brightness</gui> slider to the value you want to
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
index bace1649..5ef962cc 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-23" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -71,6 +72,12 @@
 </section>
 -->
 
+  <comment>
+    <cite date="2018-07-29" href="mailto:mdhillca gmail com">Michael Hill</cite>
+    <p>Presentation Mode needs to be added here and look-display-fuzzy, or
+    given its own page when it can be tested.</p>
+  </comment>
+
 <section id="steps">
   <title>Set up an additional monitor</title>
   <p>To set up an additional monitor, connect the monitor to your computer. If
@@ -79,33 +86,78 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Displays</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
+      overview and start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Devices</gui> in the sidebar.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Displays</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Displays</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>In the <gui>Display Arrangement</gui> diagram, drag your displays to
+      the relative positions you want.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on the monitor that you would like to activate or deactivate,
-      then in the list of monitor configuration select <gui>Turn Off</gui> to
-      deactivate the monitor, or one of <gui>Primary</gui>,
-      <gui>Secondary</gui>, or <gui>Mirror</gui> to activate it.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Primary Display</gui> to choose your primary display.</p>
+
       <note>
-        <p>The primary monitor is the one with the
+        <p>The primary display is the one with the
         <link xref="shell-introduction">top bar</link>, and where the
         <gui>Activities</gui> overview is shown.</p>
       </note>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>To rotate the orientation of the monitor, use the buttons with the
-      arrows until the preview is correct.</p>
+      <p>Select the resolution or scale, and choose the orientation.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>When you are happy with your settings, click <gui>Apply</gui> and then
-      click <gui>Keep Changes</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Apply</gui>. The new settings will be applied for 20
+      seconds before reverting back. That way, if you cannot see anything with
+      the new settings, your old settings will be automatically restored. If
+      you are happy with the new settings, click <gui>Keep Changes</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
 </section>
 
+<section id="modes">
+
+  <title>Display modes</title>
+    <p>With two screens, these display modes are available:</p>
+    <list>
+      <item><p><gui>Join Displays:</gui> screen edges are joined so things can
+      pass from one display to another.</p></item>
+      <item><p><gui>Mirror:</gui> the same content is shown on two displays,
+      with the same resolution and orientation for both.</p></item>
+      <item><p><gui>Single Display:</gui> only one display is configured,
+      effectively turning off the other one. For instance, an external monitor
+      connected to a docked laptop with the lid closed would be the single
+      configured display.</p></item>
+    </list>
+
+</section>
+
+<section id="multiple">
+
+  <title>Adding more than one monitor</title>
+    <p>With more than two screens, <gui>Join Displays</gui> is the only mode
+    available.</p>
+    <list>
+      <item>
+        <p>Use the drop-down menu to choose which screen to configure.</p>
+      </item>
+      <item>
+        <p>Drag the screens to the desired relative positions.</p>
+      </item>
+      <item>
+        <p>Each screen can be turned off or on using the <gui>ON | OFF</gui>
+        switch.</p>
+      </item>
+    </list>
+
+</section>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-night-light.page b/gnome-help/C/display-night-light.page
new file mode 100644
index 00000000..4ba969f0
--- /dev/null
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-night-light.page
@@ -0,0 +1,57 @@
+<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      type="topic" style="task"
+      id="display-night-light">
+  <info>
+    <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
+
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-28" status="review"/>
+
+    <credit type="author copyright">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2018</years>
+    </credit>
+
+    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Night Light changes the color of your displays according to the time
+    of day.</desc>
+  </info>
+
+  <title>Adjust the color temperature of your screen</title>
+
+  <p>A computer monitor emits blue light which contributes to sleeplessness and
+  eye strain after dark. <gui>Night Light</gui> changes the color of your
+  displays according to the time of day, making the color warmer in the
+  evening. To enable <gui>Night Light</gui>:</p>
+
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
+      overview and start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Devices</gui> in the sidebar.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Displays</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Night Light</gui> to open the settings.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Set the <gui>Night Light</gui> switch to <gui>ON</gui>. The screen
+      color will follow the sunset and sunrise times for your location. Click
+      the <gui>Manual</gui> button to set the times to a custom schedule.</p>
+      <note>
+        <p>The <link xref="shell-introduction">top bar</link> shows when
+        <gui>Night Light</gui> is active. It can be temporarily disabled from
+        the system menu.</p>
+      </note>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
+
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/look-background.page b/gnome-help/C/look-background.page
index 776686cb..c39121a0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/look-background.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/look-background.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-07" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-04-09" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -57,13 +58,16 @@
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Background</gui>.</p>
+      start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Background</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the <gui>Background</gui> or <gui>Lock Screen</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Background</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <gui>Background</gui> or <gui>Lock Screen</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>There are three choices displayed on top:</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page b/gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page
index 3d5e2d0b..c3cf71f8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-10-11" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -36,62 +37,52 @@
     <desc>The screen resolution may be set incorrectly.</desc>
   </info>
 
-<title>Why do things look fuzzy/pixelated on my screen?</title>
+  <title>Why do things look fuzzy/pixelated on my screen?</title>
 
-<p>This can happen because the display resolution that you have set it is not
-the right one for your screen.</p>
-
-<p>To solve this, open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
-overview and start typing <gui>Displays</gui>. Click on <gui>Displays</gui>
-to open the panel. Try some of the <gui>Resolution</gui> options and set the
-one that makes the screen look better.</p>
-
-<comment>
-  <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
-  <p>Would like a little more explanation on native resolution, which
-  is generally only applicable on LCDs. There's a stub for using two
-  monitors. Link from section below when it's added.</p>
-</comment>
-
-<section id="multihead">
-  <title>When multiple displays are connected</title>
-
-  <p>If you have two displays connected to the computer (for example, a normal
-  monitor and a projector), the displays might have different resolutions.
-  However, the computer’s graphics card can only display the screen in one
-  resolution at a time, so at least one of the displays might look fuzzy.</p>
-
-  <p>You can set it so that the two displays have different resolutions, but
-  you will not be able to display the same thing on both screens
-  simultaneously. In effect, you will have two independent screens connected at
-  the same time. You can move windows from one screen to another, but you
-  cannot show the same window on both screens at once.</p>
-
-  <p>To set up the displays so that they each have their own resolution:</p>
+  <p>The display resolution that is configured may not be the correct one for
+  your screen. To solve this:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Displays</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
+      overview and start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Displays</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>The displays should be listed as <gui>Mirrored</gui>. Select your main
-      display.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Devices</gui> in the sidebar.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Primary</gui> in the list of display configurations, and
-      then click <gui style="button">Apply</gui> to save.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Displays</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select each display in turn from the gray box at the top of the
-      <gui>Displays</gui> window. Change the <gui>Resolution</gui> until that
-      display looks right.</p>
+      <p>Try some of the <gui>Resolution</gui> options and select the one that
+      makes the screen look better.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+<section id="multihead">
+  <title>When multiple displays are connected</title>
+
+  <comment>
+    <cite date="2018-07-29" href="mailto:mdhillca gmail com">Michael Hill</cite>
+    <p>Describe Displays:Presentation Mode when it can be tested.</p>
+  </comment>
+
+  <p>If you have two displays connected to the computer (for example, a normal
+  monitor and a projector), the displays might have different optimal, or
+  <link xref="look-resolution#native">native</link>, resolutions.</p>
+
+  <p>Using <link xref="display-dual-monitors#modes">Mirror</link> mode, you can
+  display the same thing on two screens. Both screens use the same resolution,
+  which may not match the native resolution of either screen, so the sharpness
+  of the image may suffer on both screens.</p>
+
+  <p>Using <link xref="display-dual-monitors#modes">Join Displays</link> mode,
+  the resolution of each screen can be set independently, so they can both be
+  set to their native resolution.</p>
+
 </section>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page b/gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page
index 3dadcde3..9d2288ef 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-07" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -38,7 +39,7 @@
     (rotation).</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Change the resolution or rotation of the screen</title>
+  <title>Change the resolution or orientation of the screen</title>
 
   <p>You can change how big (or how detailed) things appear on the screen by
   changing the <em>screen resolution</em>. You can change which way up things
@@ -53,10 +54,16 @@
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Displays</gui>.</p>
+      start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Displays</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Devices</gui> in the sidebar.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Displays</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If you have multiple displays and they are not mirrored, you can have
@@ -64,7 +71,7 @@
       area.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the resolution and rotation.</p>
+      <p>Select the resolution or scale, and choose the orientation.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui>Apply</gui>. The new settings will be applied for 20
@@ -91,12 +98,33 @@
 
 </section>
 
-<section id="rotation">
-  <title>Rotation</title>
+<section id="native">
+  <title>Native Resolution</title>
+
+  <p>The <em>native resolution</em> of a laptop screen or LCD monitor is the
+  one that works best: the pixels in the video signal will line up precisely
+  with the pixels on the screen. When the screen is required to show other
+  resolutions, interpolation is necessary to represent the pixels, causing a
+  loss of image quality.</p>
+
+</section>
+
+<section id="scale">
+  <title>Scale</title>
+
+  <p>The scale setting increases the size of objects shown on the screen to
+  match the density of your display, making them easier to read. Choose from
+  <gui>100%</gui>, <gui>200%</gui>, or <gui>300%</gui>.</p>
+
+</section>
+
+<section id="orientation">
+  <title>Orientation</title>
 
-  <p>On some laptops, you can physically rotate the screen in many directions.
-  It is useful to be able to change the display rotation. You can rotate what
-  you see on your screen by pressing the buttons with the arrows.</p>
+  <p>On some laptops and monitors, you can physically rotate the screen in many
+  directions. Click <gui>Orientation</gui> in the panel and choose from
+  <gui>Landscape</gui>, <gui>Portrait Right</gui>, <gui>Portrait Left</gui>, or
+  <gui>Landscape (flipped)</gui>.</p>
 
 </section>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page b/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page
index 0e43b1c1..e64be777 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-10-29" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-29" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.20" date="2016-06-15" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -47,14 +48,17 @@
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
-      overview and start typing <gui>Power</gui>.</p>
+      overview and start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Power</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Switch <gui>Dim screen when inactive</gui> to <gui>OFF</gui> in the <gui>Power
-      Saving</gui> section.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Power</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Switch <gui>Dim screen when inactive</gui> to <gui>OFF</gui> in the
+      <gui>Power Saving</gui> section.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/prefs-display.page b/gnome-help/C/prefs-display.page
index a1408db9..4de4a491 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/prefs-display.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/prefs-display.page
@@ -9,13 +9,16 @@
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>
       <link xref="look-background">Background</link>,
-      <link xref="look-resolution">size and rotation</link>,
-      <!--display-dimscreen is a stub. Please add
-      the link back when it's unstubbed.-Aruna
-      <link xref="display-dimscreen">-->brightness…
+      <link xref="look-resolution">size and orientation</link>,
+      <link xref="display-brightness">brightness</link>,
+      <link xref="display-night-light">color temperature</link>…
     </desc>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page b/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
index 81eed306..77b2eb4c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-03" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -43,10 +44,13 @@
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Privacy</gui>.</p>
+      start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Privacy</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Privacy</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Press on <gui>Screen Lock</gui>.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/wacom-left-handed.page b/gnome-help/C/wacom-left-handed.page
index 5af6bd63..2a469a64 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/wacom-left-handed.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/wacom-left-handed.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-22" status="review"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="wacom"/>
 
@@ -31,11 +32,20 @@
 <steps>
   <item>
     <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
-    start typing <gui>Wacom Tablet</gui>.</p>
+    start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
   </item>
   <item>
-    <p>Click on <gui>Wacom Tablet</gui> to open the panel.</p>
-    <!-- TODO: document how to connet the tablet using Bluetooth/add link -->
+    <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Click <gui>Devices</gui> in the sidebar.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Click <gui>Wacom Tablet</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Click the <gui>Tablet</gui> button in the header bar.</p>
+    <!-- TODO: document how to connect the tablet using Bluetooth/add link -->
     <note style="tip"><p>If no tablet is detected, you’ll be asked to
     <gui>Please plug in or turn on your Wacom tablet</gui>. Click the
     <gui>Bluetooth Settings</gui> link to connect a wireless tablet.</p></note>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/wacom-mode.page b/gnome-help/C/wacom-mode.page
index 0acb7fc4..70f129e3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/wacom-mode.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/wacom-mode.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-29" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-22" status="review"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="wacom"/>
 
@@ -29,10 +30,19 @@
 <steps>
   <item>
     <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
-    start typing <gui>Wacom Tablet</gui>.</p>
+    start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
   </item>
   <item>
-    <p>Click on <gui>Wacom Tablet</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+    <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Click <gui>Devices</gui> in the sidebar.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Click <gui>Wacom Tablet</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Click the <gui>Tablet</gui> button in the header bar.</p>
     <!-- TODO: document how to connet the tablet using Bluetooth/add link -->
     <note style="tip"><p>If no tablet is detected, you’ll be asked to
     <gui>Please plug in or turn on your Wacom tablet</gui>. Click the
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/wacom-multi-monitor.page b/gnome-help/C/wacom-multi-monitor.page
index cc9d4e64..b16470d1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/wacom-multi-monitor.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/wacom-multi-monitor.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-29" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-22" status="review"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="wacom"/>
 
@@ -38,10 +39,19 @@
 <steps>
   <item>
     <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
-    start typing <gui>Wacom Tablet</gui>.</p>
+    start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
   </item>
   <item>
-    <p>Click on <gui>Wacom Tablet</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+    <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Click <gui>Devices</gui> in the sidebar.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Click <gui>Wacom Tablet</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Click the <gui>Tablet</gui> button in the header bar.</p>
     <!-- TODO: document how to connet the tablet using Bluetooth/add link -->
     <note style="tip"><p>If no tablet is detected, you’ll be asked to
     <gui>Please plug in or turn on your Wacom tablet</gui>. Click the
@@ -58,7 +68,7 @@
     <p>Switch <gui>Keep aspect ratio (letterbox)</gui> to <gui>ON</gui> to
     match the drawing area of the tablet to the proportions of the monitor.
       This setting, also called <em>force proportions</em>,
-      <em>letterboxes</em> the drawing area on a tablet to correspond more
+      "letterboxes" the drawing area on a tablet to correspond more
       directly to a display. For example, a 4∶3 tablet would be mapped so that
       the drawing area would correspond to a widescreen display.</p>
   </item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/wacom-stylus.page b/gnome-help/C/wacom-stylus.page
index be6f4faf..69f1175c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/wacom-stylus.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/wacom-stylus.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-29" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-07-22" status="review"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="wacom"/>
 
@@ -33,18 +34,26 @@
 <steps>
   <item>
     <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
-    start typing <gui>Wacom Tablet</gui>.</p>
+    start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
   </item>
   <item>
-    <p>Click on <gui>Wacom Tablet</gui> to open the panel.</p>
-    <!-- TODO: document how to connet the tablet using Bluetooth/add link -->
-    <note style="tip"><p>If no tablet is detected, you’ll be asked to
-    <gui>Please plug in or turn on your Wacom tablet</gui>. Click the
-    <gui>Bluetooth Settings</gui> link to connect a wireless tablet.</p></note>
+    <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
   </item>
-  <item><p>The lower part of the panel contains details and settings specific
-   to your stylus, with the device name (the stylus class) and diagram to the
-   left. These settings can be adjusted:</p>
+  <item>
+    <p>Click <gui>Devices</gui> in the sidebar.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Click <gui>Wacom Tablet</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Click the <gui>Stylus</gui> button in the header bar.</p>
+    <note style="tip"><p>If no stylus is detected, you’ll be asked to
+    <gui>Please move your stylus to the proximity of the tablet to configure
+    it</gui>.</p></note>
+  </item>
+  <item><p>The panel contains details and settings specific to your stylus,
+   with the device name (the stylus class) and diagram to the left. These
+   settings can be adjusted:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p><gui>Eraser Pressure Feel:</gui> use the slider to adjust the
        “feel” (how physical pressure is translated to digital values) between
@@ -60,9 +69,9 @@
   </item>
 </steps>
 
-<note style="info"><p>If you have more than one stylus, when the additional
- stylus gets close to the tablet, a pager will be displayed next to the stylus
- device name. Use the pager to choose which stylus to configure.</p>
+<note style="info">
+  <p>If you have more than one stylus, use the pager next to
+  the stylus device name to choose which stylus to configure.</p>
 </note>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/Makefile.am b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
index 11fa9afd..6cff828b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/Makefile.am
+++ b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
@@ -197,6 +197,7 @@ HELP_FILES = \
        display-blank.page \
        display-brightness.page \
        display-dual-monitors.page \
+       display-night-light.page \
        files-autorun.page \
        files-browse.page \
        files-copy.page \


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