[release-notes/gnome-3-28] wip

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 5db3ca75c8c9379dffdfbcb7059801470bafc0fb
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Thu Feb 22 09:28:24 2018 +0000

    wip

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@@ -44,7 +44,8 @@
   <section id="photos">
     <title>Improved Photos</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p></p>
+    <p>Photos has had a number of improvements for GNOME 3.28. Most significantly, a new import from device 
feature makes it easy to add photos to your collection from removable media. Import automatically detects if 
a device contains new images. It also allows organizing new images into folders as they are imported.</p>
+    <p>Other improvements in Photos include new editing tools for shadows and hightlights, and performance 
improvements.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="cantarell">
@@ -57,19 +58,23 @@
 <section id="boxes">
     <title>New Boxes Features</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p></p>
+    <p>Boxes, the GNOME application for using remote and virtual machines, has received a number of 
significant new features and improvements for GNOME 3.28.</p>
+    <p>When creating a new virtual machine, Boxes now offers a range of popular operating systems, which it 
can automatically download and install.</p>
+    <p>Boxes in GNOME 3.28 makes it easy to transfer files between your computer and virtual machines. To 
transfer, you can either drag and drop files directly on to the Boxes window. Alternatively, you can select 
the <gui>Send Files</gui> option and select files to be transfer to the virtual machine from a file chooser 
window. In both cases, Boxes provides feedback about the progress of file transfers, so you know how long 
they are going to take and when they have finished.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="on-screen-keyboard">
     <title>All-New Screen Keyboard</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>GNOME's screen keyboard has been completely rewritten for 3.28.</p>
+    <p>GNOME's screen keyboard has been completely rewritten for 3.28. The new keyboard automatically 
activates when a text area is selected, and the view is shifted in order to ensure that the text area is 
visible while typing. A variety of layouts are supported for different locales.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="Usage">
-    <title>Usage - A New Application</title>
+    <title>Meet Usage</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p></p>
+    <p>Usage is a new GNOME application that is being introduced in 3.28 as a technology preview. Usage 
allows a range of hardware-related issues to be examined and diagnosed, including performance issues and disk 
capacity. The initial version includes features for examining performance issues, including CPU and memory 
usage. These are presented as color-coded graphs, and applications which are using large amounts of resources 
are highlighted and can be killed.</p>
+    <p>The Usage preview also allows examining disk usage. This feature makes it easy to find files and data 
that you might want to remove in order to free up space.</p>
+    <p>More features are planned for the future, including network, power and data usage.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="thats-not-all">
@@ -77,12 +82,11 @@
     <p>As usual, there are also many other smaller improvements in this GNOME
     release. Here are some of them!</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p>Clocks - can now select UTC.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Contacts - can now be sorted by either first name or surname.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Contacts - Various UI cleanups, new shortcuts window.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Software - can now browse categories by rating or date; improved browsing UI</p></item>
-      <item><p>Calendar - month view has an improved layout. It also has some fancy animations</p></item>
-      <item><p>Calendar - weather integration</p></item>
+      <item><p>In <app>Clocks</app>, it is now possible to add the UTC timezone to your world times. This 
feature also allows UTC to be shown in the top bar calendar.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The <app>Contacts</app> application now allows sorting by either surname or first name. It 
also has a new shortcuts window and a number of minor interface improvements.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Browsing applications by category has been improved in <app>Software</app>. Not only does 
this give a better view, but it is now possible to sort applications by rating or by name.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The month view in <app>Calendar</app> has been improved - the layout is better and 
overflowing events are easier to interact with.</p></item>
+      <item><p><app>Calendar</app> also has weather integration for 3.28.</p></item>
       <item><p>Software - now allows disabling and removing repositories</p></item>
       <item><p>To Do - updated task view design - draggable rows. Improved Todoist integration</p></item>
       <item><p>The font viewer now shows more information</p></item>