[release-notes/gnome-3-30: 18/21] Rewrite "And That's Not All" section

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commit eaadc01b68f89714c302249ef3d15ff14aa1b2ab
Author: Link Dupont <link sub-pop net>
Date:   Mon Aug 13 08:49:34 2018 -0700

    Rewrite "And That's Not All" section

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diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
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@@ -78,11 +78,12 @@
     <p>As usual, there are also many other smaller improvements in this GNOME
     release. Here are some of them!</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p><app>Files</app>, the GNOME file browser, features a more streamlined location and search 
bar.</p></item>
-      <item><p><app>Settings</app> has a new panel to manage Thunderbolt devices. In addition, it now 
dynamically shows hardware-related panels only when relevant hardware is detected.</p></item>
-      <item><p>The <app>Initial Setup Assistant</app> has an improved avatar selection interface.</p></item>
-      <item><p><app>Notes</app>, the GNOME note-taking application, received some design improvements, 
making notes more readable and easier to use.</p></item>
-      <item><p>The <app>Disks</app> application can decrypt and mount storage volumes encrypted by 
VeraCrypt.</p></item>
+      <item><p>GNOME now uses fewer system resources, which means you can run more apps at once without 
encountering performance issues.</p></item>
+      <item><p><app>Files</app>, the GNOME file browser, features a more streamlined location and search 
bar, helping you find the files you want faster.</p></item>
+      <item><p><app>Settings</app> has a new panel to manage Thunderbolt devices, and now dynamically shows 
hardware-related panels only when relevant hardware is detected, keeping the list of panels clean and 
relevant to your computer.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The <app>Initial Setup Assistant</app> has an improved avatar selection interface, showcasing 
the new suite of avatar images.</p></item>
+      <item><p><app>Notes</app>, the GNOME note-taking application, boasts improved notes style and zoom 
controls, making notes more readable and easier to use.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The <app>Disks</app> application can decrypt and mount storage volumes encrypted by 
VeraCrypt, allowing you to share important content more securely.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>