[gnome-user-docs] Fix #789470 Typos etc. in the system administration guide
- From: Petr Kovář <pmkovar src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs] Fix #789470 Typos etc. in the system administration guide
- Date: Mon, 30 Oct 2017 19:16:33 +0000 (UTC)
commit 201444b3141450c685c1e89b86eafedcab9083ed
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date: Mon Oct 30 20:15:04 2017 +0100
Fix #789470 Typos etc. in the system administration guide
system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-command-line.page | 3 ++-
system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-printing.page | 2 +-
system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-repartitioning.page | 7 +++----
system-admin-guide/C/network-printer-config.page | 8 ++++----
4 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-command-line.page b/system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-command-line.page
index 8a194b2..2231bc6 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-command-line.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-command-line.page
@@ -26,7 +26,8 @@
<title>Disable command-line access</title>
<p>You can prevent users from being able to access the command-line through
- virtual terminals and terminal applications by in three areas:</p>
+ virtual terminals and terminal applications by following the steps described
+ below.</p>
<list>
<item>
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-printing.page b/system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-printing.page
index 148a41a..7ffe910 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-printing.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-printing.page
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ disable-printing=true
<listing>
<title><file>/etc/dconf/db/local.db/locks/printing</file></title>
<code>
-# Lock file saving settings
+# Lock printing settings
/org/gnome/desktop/lockdown/disable-printing
</code>
</listing>
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-repartitioning.page
b/system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-repartitioning.page
index 56081e8..7aec5b8 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-repartitioning.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-repartitioning.page
@@ -58,8 +58,8 @@
<listing>
<code><![CDATA[
<action id="org.freedesktop.udisks2.modify-device">
- <description>Modify the disks settings</description>
- <message>Authentication is required to modify the disks settings</message>
+ <description>Modify the drive settings</description>
+ <message>Authentication is required to modify drive settings</message>
<defaults>
<allow_any>no</allow_any>
<allow_inactive>no</allow_inactive>
@@ -77,7 +77,6 @@
</steps>
<p>When the user tries to change the disk settings, the following message is
- shown: <gui>Authentication is required to modify the disks
- settings</gui>.</p>
+ shown: <gui>Authentication is required to modify drive settings</gui>.</p>
</page>
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/network-printer-config.page
b/system-admin-guide/C/network-printer-config.page
index e6183cc..f6a1047 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/network-printer-config.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/network-printer-config.page
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
<p>Adapted from GNOME Bugzilla – Bug 694569</p>
</comment>
- <p>This topic explains how to make printers, windows printers in particular,
+ <p>This topic explains how to make printers, Windows printers in particular,
available in GNOME.</p>
<p>There is no preconfiguration needed for being able to install Samba
@@ -46,11 +46,11 @@
<gui>Unlock</gui> button.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Click the <key>+</key> key below the list of printers.</p>
+ <p>Click the <gui>+</gui> button below the list of printers.</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>If your printers are public, wait for the printers which are
- available on your windows network to appear. Otherwise, type the address
+ available on your Windows network to appear. Otherwise, type the address
of the Samba server and press <key>Enter</key>.</p>
</item>
<item>
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
<p>Select the printer to be installed.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Press the <key>Add</key> key.</p>
+ <p>Press the <gui>Add</gui> button.</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>From the drivers available on your computer, select a suitable driver
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