[gnome-getting-started-docs] Update gs-connect-online-accounts



commit 147ff278a2793acca015817f9e490fdaa77121d4
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date:   Sun Oct 1 22:24:36 2017 +0200

    Update gs-connect-online-accounts

 gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page |   22 +++++++---------------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page
index 375b915..1eff1de 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page
@@ -1,5 +1,4 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      xmlns:ui="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/ui/";
       xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="ui" id="gs-connect-online-accounts">
 
@@ -34,34 +33,27 @@
     src="gs-goa2.svg" width="100%" />
     
     <steps style="continues">
-      <item><p>Click the <gui>Online Accounts</gui> panel, then
-      click the <gui>Add an online account</gui> button.</p></item>
-    </steps>
-    
-    <note><p>If you have set up an online account before, you can add another
-     online account by clicking the <gui>+</gui> button at the bottom left
-     corner of the window.</p></note>
-
+      <item><p>Click the <gui>Online Accounts</gui> panel, then click the online
+      account service you want to use.</p>
 
-    <steps style="continues">  
-      <item><p>Click the online account you want to use. This will open a new
-       window where you can sign in to your online account.</p></item>
+      <p>This will open a new window where you can sign in to your online
+      account.</p></item>
     </steps>
       
     <media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg"
     src="gs-goa4.svg" width="100%" />
 
-    <steps style="continues">  
+    <steps style="continues">
       <item><p>In most cases, you will have to grant access to the online
        service after signing in to get started.</p></item>
       <item><p>For example, if you are connecting to your Google account, you
-       will have to click the <gui>Grant Access</gui> button.</p></item>
+       will have to click the <gui>Allow</gui> button.</p></item>
     </steps>
 
     <media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg"
     src="gs-goa5.svg" width="100%" />
 
-    <steps style="continues">  
+    <steps style="continues">
       <item><p>Many online accounts let you choose the services you want to use
        with your online account. If you do not want to use a service, disable it
        by clicking the <gui>ON/OFF</gui> switch on the right-hand side of the


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