[gimp-web/testing] Touchup to the 2.8.22 news item

[Michael Schumacher <schumaml src gnome org>]

commit edbe053bc6aa3356056e420d4de8fa57546c2b00
Author: Michael Schumacher <schumaml gmx de>
Date:   Thu May 11 21:50:18 2017 +0200

    Touchup to the 2.8.22 news item

 content/news/2017-05-11 GIMP 2.8.22 Released.md |    6 +++---
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diff --git a/content/news/2017-05-11 GIMP 2.8.22 Released.md b/content/news/2017-05-11 GIMP 2.8.22 Released.md
index 5aef897..de224c4 100644
--- a/content/news/2017-05-11 GIMP 2.8.22 Released.md   
+++ b/content/news/2017-05-11 GIMP 2.8.22 Released.md   
@@ -7,12 +7,12 @@ Summary: We are releasing GIMP 2.8.22 with various bug fixes.
 
 We are releasing GIMP 2.8.22 with various bug fixes. 
 
-All platforms will benefit from a change to the image window hierarchy in single window mode, which improves 
painting performance of certain GTK+ themes are used.
+All platforms will benefit from a change to the image window hierarchy in single window mode, which improves 
painting performance when certain GTK+ themes are used.
 
-This version fixes an ancient CVS bug, [CVE-2007-3126](https://nvd.nist.gov/vuln/detail/CVE-2007-3126). Our 
attempts to reproduce the bug as described there failed with 2.8 and thus the impact had likely been minimal 
for years, but now it is gone for good.
+This version fixes an ancient CVE bug, [CVE-2007-3126](https://nvd.nist.gov/vuln/detail/CVE-2007-3126). Due 
to this bug, the ICO file import plug-in could be crashed by specially crafted image files. Our attempts to 
reproduce the bug failed with 2.8 and thus the impact had likely been minimal for years, but now it is gone 
for good.
 
 Users on the Apple macOS platforms will benefit from fixes for crashes during drag&drop and copy&paste 
operations. On the Microsoft Windows platforms, crashes encountered when using the color picker with special 
multi-screen setups are gone, and picking the actual color instead of black from anywhere on the screen 
should finally be possible.
 
 Check out the full list of [fixed issues since 
2.8.20](https://git.gnome.org/browse/gimp/plain/NEWS?h=GIMP_2_8_22).
 
-The source code, the Microsoft Windows installer and the Apple Disk Image for GIMP 2.8.22 are available from 
our [downloads page](/downloads/); so yes, this time we made an effort to publish everything at the same time 
:)
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+The source code, the Microsoft Windows installer and the Apple Disk Image for GIMP 2.8.22 are available from 
our [downloads page](/downloads/); so yes, this time we made an effort to publish everything in one go :)
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