[gnome-boxes: 2/3] Help: sync with 3.24 GUI incl comments 770255



commit 2bd9c872cd6df9ef79a92de14327c330e4edef3c
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Wed May 3 07:07:31 2017 -0400

    Help: sync with 3.24 GUI incl comments 770255

 help/C/connect.page   |    5 ++---
 help/C/create.page    |    3 +--
 help/C/interface.page |    6 +++---
 3 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/connect.page b/help/C/connect.page
index 7e8f9c5..6f2dcc9 100644
--- a/help/C/connect.page
+++ b/help/C/connect.page
@@ -23,8 +23,7 @@
   <p><app>Boxes</app> can be used to view and access a remote physical or virtual machine.</p>
 
   <note style="important">
-    <p>The remote machine should already be configured, and needs to be running
-    the <em>X Windows</em> display protocol.</p>
+    <p>The remote machine should already be configured.</p>
   </note>
 
   <steps>
@@ -35,7 +34,7 @@
 
     <item><p>Enter a URL containing the protocol, IP address and port number of
     the remote device or service. For example:</p>
-      <code>vnc://192.168.122.1:5900;</code>
+      <code>vnc://192.168.122.1:5900</code>
       <p>The protocol will be:</p>
       <list>
         <item><p>spice:// to connect to a local or remote <app>Xspice</app>
diff --git a/help/C/create.page b/help/C/create.page
index d8732fd..65a6295 100644
--- a/help/C/create.page
+++ b/help/C/create.page
@@ -35,8 +35,7 @@
         <item><p>An ISO found by <app>Boxes</app>.</p></item>
         <item><p>Installation media on a CD/DVD/USB drive.</p></item>
         <item><p>A local ISO file (if not found automatically above).</p></item>
-        <item><p>A URL to a remote machine running <em>X Windows</em> using a
-        <link xref="connect">remote connection</link>.</p></item>
+        <item><p>A URL to a <link xref="connect">remote</link> machine.</p></item>
       </list>
 
       <note style="important">
diff --git a/help/C/interface.page b/help/C/interface.page
index 6bffa30..9e302d4 100644
--- a/help/C/interface.page
+++ b/help/C/interface.page
@@ -81,9 +81,9 @@
     <item><p><gui>General</gui>: displays the box <gui>Name</gui> and
     <gui>Broker</gui> or virtualizer being used (such as <em>QEMU</em>). For a
     remote box, this tab also displays the <gui>Protocol</gui> (such as
-    <em>VNC</em>), the <gui>URL</gui> to be used for remote access, and a
-    switch to make the connection <gui>Read-only</gui>. When the box is
-    running, the <gui>Share Clipboard</gui> switch appears here.</p></item>
+    <em>VNC</em>), and the <gui>URL</gui> to be used for remote access. When
+    the box is running, the <gui>Share Clipboard</gui> switch appears
+    here.</p></item>
     <item><p><gui>System</gui> settings: shows running graphs of CPU, disk I/O
     and network activity. <gui>Memory</gui> and <gui>Maximum Disk Size</gui>
     sliders can be adjusted, and the <gui>Troubleshooting Log</gui> can be


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