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[gnome-user-docs/wip/mdh] net- pages: minor updates

commit 70190059dc5e007f97f68799c2761da87dba3a39
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Mon Mar 27 10:04:55 2017 -0400

    net- pages: minor updates
    
    https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=697125

 gnome-help/C/figures/network-wired-symbolic.svg |   37 +++++++++++++---------
 gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page          |   27 ++++++++++-------
 gnome-help/C/net-manual.page                    |   10 ++----
 gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page                    |    8 +++++
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page         |   17 ++++++++--
 5 files changed, 63 insertions(+), 36 deletions(-)
---
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index c6bfaa8..dbac39f 100644
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@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page b/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
index 7d48e41..cc9a13d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-03-13" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.15" date="2014-12-04" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.24" date="2017-03-26" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -38,9 +39,10 @@
   computer when you connect to the network. These details can change
   periodically, but you might want to have a fixed IP address for the computer
   so you always know what its address is (for example, if it is a file
-  server).</p> <p>To give your computer a fixed (static) IP address:</p>
+  server).</p>
 
   <steps>
+    <title>To give your computer a fixed (static) IP address:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
       start typing <gui>Network</gui>.</p>
@@ -49,7 +51,7 @@
       <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>In the left pane, select the network connection that you want to give
+      <p>In the left pane, select the network connection that you want to have
       a fixed address. If you plug in to the network with a cable, click
       <gui>Wired</gui>, then click the
       <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media> button in the lower right corner of
@@ -58,20 +60,23 @@
       button will be located next to the active network.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on the <gui>IPv4</gui> or <gui>IPv6</gui> tab
+      <p>Click on <gui>IPv4</gui> or <gui>IPv6</gui> in the left pane
       and change the <gui>Addresses</gui> to <em>Manual</em>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Enter the <em>Address</em>, <em>Netmask</em>, and <em>Gateway</em>
-      information into the appropriate boxes. How you choose these will depend
-      on your network setup; there are specific rules governing which IP
-      addresses and netmasks are valid for a given network.</p>
+      <p>Type in the <gui xref="net-what-is-ip-address">IP Address</gui> and
+      <gui>Gateway</gui>, as well as the appropriate <gui>Netmask</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>If necessary, enter a <em>Domain Name Server</em> address into the
-      <gui>DNS servers</gui> box. This is the IP address of a server which
-      looks up domain names; most corporate networks and internet providers
-      have dedicated DNS servers.</p>
+      <p>In the <gui>DNS</gui> section, switch <gui>Automatic</gui> to
+      <gui>OFF</gui>. Enter the IP address of a DNS server you want to use.
+      Enter additional DNS server addresses using the <gui>+</gui> button.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>In the <gui>Routes</gui> section, switch <gui>Automatic</gui> to
+      <gui>OFF</gui>. Enter the <gui>Address</gui>, <gui>Netmask</gui>,
+      <gui>Gateway</gui> and <gui>Metric</gui> for a route you want to use.
+      Enter additional routes using the <gui>+</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui>Apply</gui>. The network connection should now have a fixed
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
index bbb718e..58e0585 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
@@ -54,14 +54,12 @@
       plugged in.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>IPv4</gui> and change <gui>Addresses</gui> to
-      <gui>Manual</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>IPv4</gui> or <gui>IPv6</gui> in the left pane
+      and change the <gui>Addresses</gui> to <em>Manual</em>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Type in the <gui>Address</gui> and <gui>Gateway</gui>, as well as the
-      appropriate <gui>Netmask</gui>.</p>
-      <p>These must be <em>IP addresses</em>; that is, they must be four
-      numbers separated by periods (e.g. 123.45.6.78).</p>
+      <p>Type in the <gui xref="net-what-is-ip-address">IP Address</gui> and
+      <gui>Gateway</gui>, as well as the appropriate <gui>Netmask</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>In the <gui>DNS</gui> section, switch <gui>Automatic</gui> to
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page b/gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page
index 86cd3f7..b213d72 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-11-10" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.24" date="2017-03-26" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -68,4 +69,11 @@
     connection.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
+    <note style = "tip">
+      <p>Some phones have a setting called <em>USB tethering</em> that requires
+      no setup on the computer. When the setting is activated on the phone, the
+      connection will show up as <gui>Ethernet Connected</gui> in the system
+      menu and <gui>USB ethernet</gui> in the network panel.</p>
+    </note>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
index d372f98..c4f5462 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.24" date="2017-03-26" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -34,7 +35,14 @@
 <p>If you have your computer on an airplane (or some other area where wireless
  connections are not allowed), you should switch off your wireless. You may
  also want to switch off your wireless for other reasons (to save battery power,
- for example). To do this:</p>
+ for example).</p>
+
+  <note>
+    <p>Using <em>Airplane Mode</em> will completely turn off all wireless
+    connections, including WiFi, 3G and Bluetooth connections.</p>
+  </note>
+
+  <p>To turn on airplane mode:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
@@ -50,9 +58,10 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <note>
-    <p>Using <em>Airplane Mode</em> will completely turn off all wireless
-    connections, including WiFi, 3G and Bluetooth connections.</p>
+  <note style = "tip">
+    <p>You can turn off your WiFi connection from the 
+    <gui xref="shell-introduction#yourname">system menu</gui> by clicking on 
+    the connection name and choosing <gui>Turn Off</gui>.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>
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