[recipes/recipes-1.0] Update help with edits from Michael Hill



commit e0c8c5ee9bcee476c02b11ebcd2c1ba5f48949d1
Author: Paul Cutler <paul r cutler gmail com>
Date:   Tue Mar 21 06:42:05 2017 -0500

    Update help with edits from Michael Hill
    
    Update documentation with patch from Michael Hill of the GNOME Docs team.  Remove "-" from help, such as 
"upper-left", fix button locations where wrong and clarify some steps.

 help/C/add-recipe.page  |    4 ++--
 help/C/cooking.page     |    6 +++---
 help/C/find-recipe.page |    2 +-
 help/C/shop.page        |   13 ++++++-------
 4 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/add-recipe.page b/help/C/add-recipe.page
index 835b8e5..ed079be 100644
--- a/help/C/add-recipe.page
+++ b/help/C/add-recipe.page
@@ -21,8 +21,8 @@
   <title>Add or Edit a Recipe</title>
   
   <p>You can add your own recipe to <app>Recipes</app> or edit a recipe you 
-  added.  To create a new recipe, press the <gui>New Recipe</gui> in the 
-  upper-right corner.
+  added.  To create a new recipe, press <gui>New Recipe</gui> in the 
+  upper left corner.
   </p>
   <note><p>You can only edit the recipes you create, not the recipes included.
   </p></note>
diff --git a/help/C/cooking.page b/help/C/cooking.page
index a01ffb2..d54694e 100644
--- a/help/C/cooking.page
+++ b/help/C/cooking.page
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
       </p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press the <gui>Start Cooking</gui>button in the top-right corner.
+      <p>Press the <gui>Start Cooking</gui>button in the top right corner.
       </p>
     </item>
     <item>
@@ -54,12 +54,12 @@
       started a timer, you can press <gui>Pause</gui> to pause the timer
       or <gui>Reset</gui> to re-start the timer from the beginning. You can
       have multiple timers running and the names of the step associated
-      with each timer will be shown in the upper-left corner of 
+      with each timer will be shown in the upper left corner of 
       <app>Recipes</app>.  When the timer is done, your computer
       will beep and <gui>Time is up!</gui> will be shown.
       </p>
       <p>When a timer is running, the name of the timer will be shown
-      in the upper-right corner of hands-free mode.  You can move to the next
+      in the upper left corner of hands-free mode.  You can move to the next
       steps while a timer is running.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
diff --git a/help/C/find-recipe.page b/help/C/find-recipe.page
index 37e38aa..9355602 100644
--- a/help/C/find-recipe.page
+++ b/help/C/find-recipe.page
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
         </p>
       </item>
       <item>
-        <p>Dietary Restriction
+        <p>Dietary restrictions
         </p>
       </item>
       <item>
diff --git a/help/C/shop.page b/help/C/shop.page
index 0c0e830..74846d4 100644
--- a/help/C/shop.page
+++ b/help/C/shop.page
@@ -41,27 +41,26 @@
     </steps>
 
   <p>When you are finished adding to the shopping list, press the 
-  <gui>View Shopping List</gui> button or return to the main 
-  <app>Recipes</app> window and <gui>Buy ingredients</gui> bar in the
+  <gui>View Shopping List</gui> button, or return to the main 
+  <app>Recipes</app> window and click the <gui>Buy ingredients</gui> bar in the
   <gui>Today</gui> section.</p>
   
   <p>
   <app>Recipes</app> will display the <gui>Buy Ingredients</gui> page.  
-  The recipes that you have added to the shopping list will be displayed and
-  the ingredients for all of the recipes you need to purchase will be
-  added to the shopping list for you.
+  The ingredients you need to purchase for all of the recipes will be displayed
+  in a list below the recipes that require them.
   </p>
   
   <section id="change-quantity">
   <title>Edit the Shopping List</title>
   <p>
   You can increase the serving side of a recipe and the shopping list will 
-  automatically increase the ingredients you need to purchase.
+  automatically increase the quantities of the ingredients you need to purchase.
   </p>
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>The recipes you have added to the shopping list are shown
-      at the top.  In the upper-right corner of the recipe the serving size 
+      at the top.  In the upper right corner of the recipe the serving size 
       is shown.  Click the number displayed int he recipe.
       </p>
     </item>


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