[recipes/recipes-1.0] Proof read and edit add-recipes.page
- From: Matthias Clasen <matthiasc src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [recipes/recipes-1.0] Proof read and edit add-recipes.page
- Date: Fri, 24 Mar 2017 17:28:49 +0000 (UTC)
commit a138e58ca81b6e6aecf5a17e2e92ad0391d39357
Author: Paul Cutler <paul r cutler gmail com>
Date: Mon Mar 20 13:33:18 2017 -0500
Proof read and edit add-recipes.page
help/C/add-recipe.page | 27 +++++++++++++++------------
1 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/add-recipe.page b/help/C/add-recipe.page
index 7bd044f..835b8e5 100644
--- a/help/C/add-recipe.page
+++ b/help/C/add-recipe.page
@@ -37,24 +37,25 @@
what kind of meal.</p>
</item>
<item><title>Description</title>
- <p>A an open field to describe the recipe in as much detail as you
+ <p>A text box to describe the recipe in as much detail as you
would like.</p>
</item>
<item>
<title>Ingredients and Lists</title>
<p>What you will need to make the recipe. Lists allow you to have a
separate list of ingredients. For example, if you are baking a cake,
- you could have a list for the ingredients for the cake and a different
- list for the ingredients for the frosting.</p>
+ you could have a list for the ingredients of the cake and a different
+ list of ingredients for the frosting.</p>
</item>
<item><title>Directions</title>
- <p>What steps are needed to make the recipe, how to cook each step,
+ <p>The steps needed to make the recipe, how to cook each step,
and at what temperature .</p>
</item>
<item>
<title>Images</title>
<p>You can add a photo of the recipe and also optionally add photos
- for each step in the Directions.
+ for each step in the Directions. Photos added for each step
+ will be displayed when using hands-free cooking mode.
</p>
</item>
</terms>
@@ -127,7 +128,7 @@
an ingredient list for the cake and an ingredient list for the frosting.
To create a list:</p>
<steps>
- <item><p>Select the <gui>Add List</gui> button.</p>
+ <item><p>Press the <gui>Add List</gui> button.</p>
</item>
<item><p>Enter the name of the list, such as cake, in the
<gui>Name of the List</gui> text box.</p>
@@ -142,12 +143,14 @@
<item><p>Choose the ingredient from the list or enter
the ingredient in the <gui>Search</gui> box.</p>
</item>
- <item><p>Click <gui>Add</gui> to add the ingredient to the list or
- click <gui>Amount</gui> to how much of the ingredient is needed.</p>
+ <item><p>Press the <gui>Add</gui> button to add the ingredient to the
+ list or click <gui>Amount</gui> to how much of the ingredient is
+ needed.</p>
</item>
- <item><p>Under <gui>Amount</gui> you can enter the quantity needed
- and then press <gui>Add</gui>. Or you can enter the amount and choose
- the measurement from the list and then press <gui>Add</gui>.</p>
+ <item><p>In the <gui>Amount</gui> drop down box you can enter the
+ quantity needed and then press <gui>Add</gui>. Or you can enter the
+ amount and choose the measurement from the list and then press the
+ <gui>Add</gui> button.</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>Repeat these steps until all ingredients have been added to the
@@ -162,7 +165,7 @@
<section id="images">
<title>Add Images and Photos</title>
<p>To add an image to your recipe, press the <gui style="button">
- +</gui> below the camera icon or press <guiseq>
+ +</gui> button below the camera icon or press <guiseq>
<gui>Add Image</gui> <gui style="button">+</gui>
</guiseq> at the bottom of the <app>Recipes</app> window. Select
the image you would like to add and press <gui>Open</gui>.
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