[recipes] Update help with edits from Michael Hill
- From: Matthias Clasen <matthiasc src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [recipes] Update help with edits from Michael Hill
- Date: Fri, 24 Mar 2017 15:49:31 +0000 (UTC)
commit 58a37617635372158757231e000a3238d1afddd2
Author: Paul Cutler <paul r cutler gmail com>
Date: Tue Mar 21 06:42:05 2017 -0500
Update help with edits from Michael Hill
Update documentation with patch from Michael Hill of the GNOME Docs team. Remove "-" from help, such as
"upper-left", fix button locations where wrong and clarify some steps.
help/C/add-recipe.page | 4 ++--
help/C/cooking.page | 6 +++---
help/C/find-recipe.page | 2 +-
help/C/shop.page | 13 ++++++-------
4 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/add-recipe.page b/help/C/add-recipe.page
index 835b8e5..ed079be 100644
--- a/help/C/add-recipe.page
+++ b/help/C/add-recipe.page
@@ -21,8 +21,8 @@
<title>Add or Edit a Recipe</title>
<p>You can add your own recipe to <app>Recipes</app> or edit a recipe you
- added. To create a new recipe, press the <gui>New Recipe</gui> in the
- upper-right corner.
+ added. To create a new recipe, press <gui>New Recipe</gui> in the
+ upper left corner.
</p>
<note><p>You can only edit the recipes you create, not the recipes included.
</p></note>
diff --git a/help/C/cooking.page b/help/C/cooking.page
index a01ffb2..d54694e 100644
--- a/help/C/cooking.page
+++ b/help/C/cooking.page
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Press the <gui>Start Cooking</gui>button in the top-right corner.
+ <p>Press the <gui>Start Cooking</gui>button in the top right corner.
</p>
</item>
<item>
@@ -54,12 +54,12 @@
started a timer, you can press <gui>Pause</gui> to pause the timer
or <gui>Reset</gui> to re-start the timer from the beginning. You can
have multiple timers running and the names of the step associated
- with each timer will be shown in the upper-left corner of
+ with each timer will be shown in the upper left corner of
<app>Recipes</app>. When the timer is done, your computer
will beep and <gui>Time is up!</gui> will be shown.
</p>
<p>When a timer is running, the name of the timer will be shown
- in the upper-right corner of hands-free mode. You can move to the next
+ in the upper left corner of hands-free mode. You can move to the next
steps while a timer is running.</p>
</item>
<item>
diff --git a/help/C/find-recipe.page b/help/C/find-recipe.page
index 37e38aa..9355602 100644
--- a/help/C/find-recipe.page
+++ b/help/C/find-recipe.page
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Dietary Restriction
+ <p>Dietary restrictions
</p>
</item>
<item>
diff --git a/help/C/shop.page b/help/C/shop.page
index 0c0e830..74846d4 100644
--- a/help/C/shop.page
+++ b/help/C/shop.page
@@ -41,27 +41,26 @@
</steps>
<p>When you are finished adding to the shopping list, press the
- <gui>View Shopping List</gui> button or return to the main
- <app>Recipes</app> window and <gui>Buy ingredients</gui> bar in the
+ <gui>View Shopping List</gui> button, or return to the main
+ <app>Recipes</app> window and click the <gui>Buy ingredients</gui> bar in the
<gui>Today</gui> section.</p>
<p>
<app>Recipes</app> will display the <gui>Buy Ingredients</gui> page.
- The recipes that you have added to the shopping list will be displayed and
- the ingredients for all of the recipes you need to purchase will be
- added to the shopping list for you.
+ The ingredients you need to purchase for all of the recipes will be displayed
+ in a list below the recipes that require them.
</p>
<section id="change-quantity">
<title>Edit the Shopping List</title>
<p>
You can increase the serving side of a recipe and the shopping list will
- automatically increase the ingredients you need to purchase.
+ automatically increase the quantities of the ingredients you need to purchase.
</p>
<steps>
<item>
<p>The recipes you have added to the shopping list are shown
- at the top. In the upper-right corner of the recipe the serving size
+ at the top. In the upper right corner of the recipe the serving size
is shown. Click the number displayed int he recipe.
</p>
</item>
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