[recipes] Proof read and edit the search help - find.recipes.page
- From: Matthias Clasen <matthiasc src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [recipes] Proof read and edit the search help - find.recipes.page
- Date: Fri, 24 Mar 2017 15:49:01 +0000 (UTC)
commit 37f950089004c6436693b273fc884817e0f1cd6e
Author: Paul Cutler <paul r cutler gmail com>
Date: Mon Mar 20 13:40:07 2017 -0500
Proof read and edit the search help - find.recipes.page
help/C/find-recipe.page | 24 ++++++++++++++++++------
1 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/find-recipe.page b/help/C/find-recipe.page
index 02277c2..37e38aa 100644
--- a/help/C/find-recipe.page
+++ b/help/C/find-recipe.page
@@ -23,8 +23,20 @@
<p>Press the search button <media type="image" mime="image/png"
src="images/search.png" its:translate="yes">
<span its:translate="yes">Search</span></media> and enter your search query.
- The search results will include any recipe with your query in the title of
- the recipe, ingredients, or the name for the chef who wrote the recipe.</p>
+ The search results can include:</p>
+
+ <list>
+ <item>
+ <p>Recipes that include the text you searched for.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <p>Ingredients that include the text you searched for.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <p>Chef names.</p>
+ </item>
+ </list>
+
<p>You can also do a more narrow search by category.
Press the search button <media type="image" mime="image/png"
src="images/search.png" its:translate="yes">
@@ -88,13 +100,13 @@
<section id="cuisines">
<title>Search by Cuisines</title>
- <p>You can also search for a recipe by what type of cuisine or region
- the recipe is. This also includes searching for seasonal recipes that
+ <p>You can also search for a recipe by what type of cuisine the recipe is
+ or region it is from. This also includes searching for seasonal recipes that
might be made during certain holidays or times of year.</p>
<steps>
<item>
- <p>In the top menu bar of <app>Recipes</app>, press
- <gui style="button">Cuisines</gui></p>.
+ <p>In the top menu bar of <app>Recipes</app>, press the
+ <gui style="button">Cuisines</gui> button</p>.
</item>
<item>
<p>A list of cuisines from around the world with brief descriptions
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