[gnome-builder/gnome-builder-3-24] Minor edits throughout the document to improve readability and to make it easier for translators. Ad



commit 4168b838acf4a972cb82854bdfe407d276c6497b
Author: Paul Cutler <paul r cutler gmail com>
Date:   Mon Mar 20 19:28:45 2017 -0500

    Minor edits throughout the document to improve readability
    and to make it easier for translators.
    Add link to the GPLv3.

 doc/projects/creating.rst |   30 ++++++++++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/doc/projects/creating.rst b/doc/projects/creating.rst
index 2eef050..3db582c 100644
--- a/doc/projects/creating.rst
+++ b/doc/projects/creating.rst
@@ -1,30 +1,35 @@
+.. _`GPLv3`: http://www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl-3.0.html
+
 ###############################
 Creating and Importing Projects
 ###############################
 
-Builder supports creating new projects as well as importing existing projects.
-When importing a project, you can either open it from your local computer or clone from a remote git 
repository.
+Builder supports creating new projects and importing existing projects.
+When importing a project, you can either open it from your local computer or
+clone it from a remote git repository.
 
 Creating a new Project
 ======================
 
 To create a new project, select "New" from the project greeter.
-You will be shown the project creation guide.
+The project creation guide will be displayed.
 
 .. image:: ../figures/newproject.png
    :align: center
 
 Give your project a meaningful name, as this is not easily changeable later.
-It should not have spaces in the name.
-If you need multiple words, consider using "-" to separate the words.
+The project name should not include spaces and if the project needs
+multiple words, use a hyphen "-" to separate the words.
 
 Choose the language you would like to use for the project.
-This will affect what templates are available.
+Depending on the language, different templates are available.
 
 Choosing a license helps promote sharing of your application.
-Builder is **GPLv3 or newer** and is our suggestion for writing new applications for GNOME.
+Builder is licensed as **GPLv3 or newer** and we suggest using `GPLv3`_ when
+writing new applications for GNOME.
 
-If you do not want git-based version control, turn off the switch to disable git support.
+If you do not want git-based version control, turn off the switch to disable
+git support.
 
 Lastly, select a suitable template for your application.
 Some patterns are available to speed up the bootstrapping of your project.
@@ -34,12 +39,13 @@ Cloning an Existing Project
 ===========================
 
 To clone an existing project, you will need the URL of your **git repository**.
-For example, to clone the Builder project, you could specify ``git://git.gnome.org/gnome-builder.git``.
+For example, to clone the Builder project, you could specify: ``git://git.gnome.org/gnome-builder.git``
 
 .. image:: ../figures/clone.png
    :align: center
 
-After entering the URL, click "Clone" in the upper right corner of the window and wait for the operation to 
complete.
-Once the project has been cloned, you will be shown the workbench window.
+After entering the URL, press the "Clone" button in the upper-right corner of
+the window and wait for the operation to complete. Once the project has been
+cloned, you will be shown the workbench window.
 
-.. note:: If the remote repository requires authorization you will be displayed with a dialog to provide 
credentials.
+.. note:: If the remote repository requires authorization a dialog will be displayed for you to input your 
credentials.


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