[recipes/wip/pcutler] Proof read and edit add-recipes.page

[Paul Cutler <pcutler src gnome org>]

commit 384b58ce370ce16e7dbfae253c093ab511857b50
Author: Paul Cutler <paul r cutler gmail com>
Date:   Mon Mar 20 13:33:18 2017 -0500

    Proof read and edit add-recipes.page

 help/C/add-recipe.page |   27 +++++++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/add-recipe.page b/help/C/add-recipe.page
index 7bd044f..835b8e5 100644
--- a/help/C/add-recipe.page
+++ b/help/C/add-recipe.page
@@ -37,24 +37,25 @@
         what kind of meal.</p>
       </item>
       <item><title>Description</title>
-        <p>A an open field to describe the recipe in as much detail as you 
+        <p>A text box to describe the recipe in as much detail as you 
         would like.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
       <title>Ingredients and Lists</title>
         <p>What you will need to make the recipe. Lists allow you to have a 
         separate list of ingredients.  For example, if you are baking a cake, 
-        you could have a list for the ingredients for the cake and a different 
-        list for the ingredients for the frosting.</p>
+        you could have a list for the ingredients of the cake and a different 
+        list of ingredients for the frosting.</p>
       </item>
       <item><title>Directions</title>
-        <p>What steps are needed to make the recipe, how to cook each step, 
+        <p>The steps needed to make the recipe, how to cook each step, 
         and at what temperature .</p>
       </item>
       <item>
         <title>Images</title>
         <p>You can add a photo of the recipe and also optionally add photos 
-        for each step in the Directions.
+        for each step in the Directions.  Photos added for each step
+        will be displayed when using hands-free cooking mode.
         </p>
       </item>
     </terms>  
@@ -127,7 +128,7 @@
       an ingredient list for the cake and an ingredient list for the frosting.
       To create a list:</p>
       <steps>
-        <item><p>Select the <gui>Add List</gui> button.</p>
+        <item><p>Press the <gui>Add List</gui> button.</p>
         </item>
         <item><p>Enter the name of the list, such as cake, in the
          <gui>Name of the List</gui> text box.</p>
@@ -142,12 +143,14 @@
         <item><p>Choose the ingredient from the list or enter
         the ingredient in the <gui>Search</gui> box.</p>
         </item>
-        <item><p>Click <gui>Add</gui> to add the ingredient to the list or 
-        click <gui>Amount</gui> to how much of the ingredient is needed.</p>
+        <item><p>Press the <gui>Add</gui> button to add the ingredient to the 
+        list or click <gui>Amount</gui> to how much of the ingredient is 
+        needed.</p>
         </item>
-        <item><p>Under <gui>Amount</gui> you can enter the quantity needed
-        and then press <gui>Add</gui>.  Or you can enter the amount and choose
-        the measurement from the list and then press <gui>Add</gui>.</p>
+        <item><p>In the <gui>Amount</gui> drop down box you can enter the 
+        quantity needed and then press <gui>Add</gui>.  Or you can enter the 
+        amount and choose the measurement from the list and then press the 
+        <gui>Add</gui> button.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
           <p>Repeat these steps until all ingredients have been added to the 
@@ -162,7 +165,7 @@
     <section id="images">
     <title>Add Images and Photos</title>
       <p>To add an image to your recipe, press the <gui style="button">
-      +</gui> below the camera icon or press <guiseq>
+      +</gui> button below the camera icon or press <guiseq>
       <gui>Add Image</gui> <gui style="button">+</gui>
       </guiseq> at the bottom of the <app>Recipes</app> window. Select
       the image you would like to add and press <gui>Open</gui>.