[release-notes/gnome-3-24] minor corrections



commit 5cff641466bc30112facec2ba05d6ef25b7c1a25
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Mon Mar 13 12:28:46 2017 +0000

    minor corrections

 help/C/index.page |   16 ++++++----------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 9365f0c..4eea2ea 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -72,11 +72,10 @@
   <section id="recipes">
     <title>New Recipes Application</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p><app>Recipes</app> is a brand new application for GNOME, which has been 
-    created by GTK+ maintainer Matthias Clasen. Intended as a community 
-    project, the application contains a collection of recipes contributed by 
-    GNOME community members. Recipes already has an extensive feature set, 
-    including:</p>
+    <p><app>Recipes</app> is a brand new application for GNOME. Intended as a 
+    community project, the application contains a collection of recipes 
+    contributed by GNOME community members. Recipes already has an extensive 
+    feature set, including:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p>Add and edit your own recipes</p></item>
       <item><p>Export and print shopping lists</p></item>
@@ -226,18 +225,15 @@
       the display of how much disk space each application is taking up, in the 
       installed view.
       </p></item>
-      <!-- TODO: check if the files item below is technically correct. -->
       <item><p><app>Files</app> now allows restricted files and folders to be 
       easily opened using administrator privileges. Just double-click on the 
       file or folder and a dialog window will allow you to enter a password in 
       order to continue. This provides a much safer way to open restricted 
       locations, compared with using root or sudo from the command line.</p></item>
-      <!-- TODO: check - is flatpakref support new for 3.24? -->
       <item><p>Software’s Flatpak support, which was introduced last release,
       has been improved. In particular, updating Flatpak applications is much 
-      smoother and provides better feedback and new <code>.flatpakref</code> 
-      files are now 
-      supported.</p></item>
+      smoother. Support for new Flatpak capabilities, such as automatic 
+      runtime downloading, is also included.</p></item>
       <item><p>GNOME’s use of typography has been improved, by making maximum 
       use of Unicode. Many of these changes are subtle but give a better 
       appearance overall.</p></item>


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