[evolution] Shorten / rewrite some ancient marketing cruft on Working Offline page

[Andre Klapper <aklapper src gnome org>]

commit 6f1b844c09935d863489e928d96607ac40fc3885
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Sun Feb 19 14:27:02 2017 +0100

    Shorten / rewrite some ancient marketing cruft on Working Offline page

 help/C/mail-working-offline.page |   10 +++++-----
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/mail-working-offline.page b/help/C/mail-working-offline.page
index f4254a4..c001db1 100644
--- a/help/C/mail-working-offline.page
+++ b/help/C/mail-working-offline.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 <!-- TODO:POST-3-8: Offline work for web calendars etc also exists => create index page for Offline working? 
-->
     <link type="guide" xref="index#mail-basic" />
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.7.4" version="0.3" date="2013-01-22" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.22.5" version="0.4" date="2017-02-19" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name its:translate="no">Andre Klapper</name>
       <email its:translate="no">ak-47 gmx net</email>
@@ -22,11 +22,11 @@
 
 <title>Working Offline</title>
 
-<p>Forced offline mode helps you communicate with remote mail storage systems like GroupWise, IMAP or 
Exchange, in situations where you are not connected to the network at all times. <app>Evolution</app> keeps a 
local copy of one or more folders to allow you to compose messages, storing them in your Outbox to be sent 
the next time you connect.</p>
+<p><app>Evolution</app> can keep a local copy of mail folders on remote systems like IMAP or exchange, to 
allow you to read messages.</p>
 
 <note style="warning"><p><app>Evolution</app>'s forced offline mode only refers to mail and does not apply 
to contacts and calendars.</p></note>
 
-<p>POP mail downloads all messages to your local system, but other connections usually download just the 
headers, and get the rest only when you want to read the message. Before you force <app>Evolution</app> to be 
offline, <app>Evolution</app> downloads the unread messages from the folders you have chosen to store.</p>
+<p>POP mail downloads all messages to your local system, but for remote accounts usually just the headers 
are downloaded. The rest, such as the body of a message, is downloaded only when you want to read the 
message. Before you force <app>Evolution</app> to be offline, <app>Evolution</app> downloads the unread 
messages from the folders you have chosen to store.</p>
 
 <section id="mark-folders">
 <title>Marking folders for offline usage</title>
@@ -39,8 +39,8 @@
 
 <section id="sync-for-offline">
 <title>Syncing messages for offline usage</title>
-<p>Your connection status is shown by the small icon in the lower left corner of the <app>Evolution</app> 
main window. When you are online, it displays two connected cables. When you force offline mode via clicking 
the icon or via <guiseq><gui>File</gui><gui>Work Offline</gui></guiseq>, the cables separate. You will be 
asked whether you want to go offline immediately or synchronize folders locally before you go offline.</p>
-<p>To download Messages for Offline Operations without immediately going offline, select 
<guiseq><gui>File</gui><gui>Download Messages for Offline Usage</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+<p>Your connection status is shown by an icon in the status bar of the <link xref="intro-main-window">main 
window</link>. When you are online, it displays two connected cables. When you force offline mode via 
clicking the icon or via <guiseq><gui>File</gui><gui>Work Offline</gui></guiseq>, the cables separate. You 
can either go offline immediately or synchronize remote folders with your local copy before you go 
offline.</p>
+<p>To synchronize folders without going offline immediately, select <guiseq><gui>File</gui><gui>Download 
Messages for Offline Usage</gui></guiseq>.</p>
 </section>
 
 <section id="network-manager-integration">