[gnome-continuous-yocto/gnomeostree-3.28-rocko: 8020/8267] toaster-manual: Rewrite of the 'Setting Up External Access' section

[Emmanuele Bassi <ebassi src gnome org>]

commit f258b6ac3a32ae537d69498d67d13b2dab169972
Author: Kristi Rifenbark <kristi rifenbark gmail com>
Date:   Wed Sep 27 16:22:48 2017 -0700

    toaster-manual: Rewrite of the 'Setting Up External Access' section
    
    (From yocto-docs rev: f3737aaeabf5ae169d07b72ef6b70e2b5d7cb4b7)
    
    Signed-off-by: Kristi Rifenbark <kristi rifenbark gmail com>
    Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard purdie linuxfoundation org>

 .../toaster-manual-setup-and-use.xml               |   27 ++++++++++++++-----
 1 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/documentation/toaster-manual/toaster-manual-setup-and-use.xml 
b/documentation/toaster-manual/toaster-manual-setup-and-use.xml
index 77291c1..62a0b63 100644
--- a/documentation/toaster-manual/toaster-manual-setup-and-use.xml
+++ b/documentation/toaster-manual/toaster-manual-setup-and-use.xml
@@ -61,19 +61,32 @@
         </para>
     </section>
 
-    <section id='setting-a-different-address'>
-        <title>Setting a Different Address</title>
+    <section id='setting-up-external-access'>
+        <title>Setting up External Access</title>
 
         <para>
             By default, Toaster binds to the loop back address
-            (i.e. localhost).
-            You can use the <filename>WEBPORT</filename> parameter to
-            set a different host.
-            For example, the following command sets the host and port
-            to "0.0.0.0:8400":
+            (i.e. localhost), which does not allow access from
+            external hosts. To allow external access, use the
+            <filename>WEBPORT</filename> parameter to open an
+            address that connects to the network, specifically the
+            IP address that your NIC uses to connect to the network.
+            You can also bind to all IP addresses the computer
+            supports by using the shortcut
+            "0.0.0.0:<replaceable>port</replaceable>".
+        </para>
+
+        <para>
+            The following example binds to all IP addresses on the
+            host:
             <literallayout class='monospaced'>
      $ source toaster start webport=0.0.0.0:8400
             </literallayout>
+            This example binds to a specific IP address on the host's
+            NIC:
+            <literallayout class='monospaced'>
+     $ source toaster start webport=192.168.1.1:8400
+            </literallayout>
         </para>
     </section>