[gnome-user-docs/wip/mdh] Update net-wired-connect.page with minor fixes
- From: Paul Cutler <pcutler src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs/wip/mdh] Update net-wired-connect.page with minor fixes
- Date: Fri, 7 Apr 2017 14:01:07 +0000 (UTC)
commit 5a85e16c738053c43a3053f16930581858390611
Author: Paul Cutler <paul r cutler gmail com>
Date: Fri Apr 7 08:57:59 2017 -0500
Update net-wired-connect.page with minor fixes
Remove contraction (can't) and change to cannot per style guide.
Change setting-up to setup to improve grammar and readability.
Related to bug 722151 with network doc updates
gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page | 4 ++--
1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
index 8899a0c..deb88aa 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
@@ -43,8 +43,8 @@
Ethernet port will indicate that it is plugged in and active.</p>
<note>
- <p>You can't plug one computer directly into another one with a network
- cable (at least, not without some extra setting-up). To connect two
+ <p>You cannot plug one computer directly into another one with a network
+ cable (at least, not without some extra setup). To connect two
computers, you should plug them both into a network hub, router or
switch.</p>
</note>
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