[gnome-user-docs/wip/mdh] Update net-wired-connect.page with minor fixes



commit 5a85e16c738053c43a3053f16930581858390611
Author: Paul Cutler <paul r cutler gmail com>
Date:   Fri Apr 7 08:57:59 2017 -0500

    Update net-wired-connect.page with minor fixes
    
    Remove contraction (can't) and change to cannot per style guide.
    Change setting-up to setup to improve grammar and readability.
    Related to bug 722151 with network doc updates

 gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page |    4 ++--
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
index 8899a0c..deb88aa 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
@@ -43,8 +43,8 @@
   Ethernet port will indicate that it is plugged in and active.</p>
 
   <note>
-    <p>You can't plug one computer directly into another one with a network
-    cable (at least, not without some extra setting-up). To connect two
+    <p>You cannot plug one computer directly into another one with a network
+    cable (at least, not without some extra setup). To connect two
     computers, you should plug them both into a network hub, router or
     switch.</p>
   </note>


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